This is my story for Friday Fictioneers this week. This is a weekly challenge to write a story in 100 words with a beginning, middle, and end. It’s supposed to follow the picture prompt given for the week. The host for the challenge is the gracious and talented author, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week the picture is a photo supplied by DLovering. Many thanks Dee.
http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/04/09/11-april-2014/
Abigail Digby Day by P.S. Joshi
Driving from Boston to Cleveland on vacation last year, I stopped for gas in the tiny village of Pitfall, MA. I noticed decorations, so asked the gas attendant about the occasion.
“Well,” he said after he spit a wad of chewing tobacco on the cement, “it’s Abigail Digby Day.”
“Oh, was she an important person around here?”
“You might say she was a dang scary old bat.” he answered back, eyes watching the pump.”Died in 1969. Said she’d curse us if we didn’t celebrate her birthday yearly. Didn’t in 1970; there was a blasted blizzard in July that year.”
Loved this!! I could totally see the gas station dude talking with an almost exasperated tone about having to celebrate someone no one could stand. Last phrase was a great punchline. I live in Qatar, and sometimes I think it’d be nice to have a blizzard in July. Would sure beat 48 C heat! (118 F).
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Thanks, Hala, for reading my story and commenting. I had fun writing it and am glad you liked it. π I know what you mean about the temperature. It’s really hot now where we live in India. Actually we live in the mountains so it’s not as hot as in Mumbai.
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This is superb imagination.
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Thanks YS for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I have fun writing these little stories. I can see these characters in my mind. π
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I really really enjoyed it. π
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That’s one way to ensure a legacy.. always knew the whip was more powerful than the carrot. Very well told.
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Thanks, Bjorn, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes. Abigail was a determined old woman. π
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Ha!ha!What a delightful tale this is Patricia-loved the voice and the small details you added to bring the characters alive-excellent take on the prompt:-)
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Thanks, Atreyee, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. It’s always fun to write these little stories. I’ve stuck some of those little details in my memory and bring them out once in a while for a dusting. They prove useful. π
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:-)Enjoyed it!
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Curse that Abigail Digby (what a great name though!) π
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By golly, El, you wouldn’t think it was a great name if you had to throw that danged party every year π¦ Thanks for reading my story and commenting on it, El. I appreciate it. π That name just seemed to fit a woman from that part of the U.S. π
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Lovely, so many names caught my name. The title, for one, then Pitfall. The whole story made me smile.
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OOPS! Caught my ATTENTION! not my name – sorry.
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Don’t worry about the typo. I make those also. I knew what you meant. π
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Thanks, Alicia, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I find writing these stories great fun which I enjoy sharing. Making up those names is part of it. π
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Haha awesome story! A good curse anyway,at least it’s an excuse to party! Could be worse…
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Thanks, Riya Anne, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes, you’re right. A party is a party and it could be worse. Maybe the elderly lady was doing them a favor after all. π Maybe she thought the village needed livening up. π
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That was fun, Patricia. BTW, one of your ending quotes fell into the next paragraph, the “Oh, was she an important person…” Pesky things!
janet
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Thanks, Janet, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for alerting me to the wandering quote. I fixed it. I hope it doesn’t decide to go wondering again. π
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βYou might say she was a dang scary old bat.β I loved this part, really made me laugh. What a fun and engaging story, good job!
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Thanks,SF&F, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I think about it and hear my characters talking. I hope that’s a good thing. π
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Dear Patricia,
Pitfall, MA. That’s a great name. Your story made me laugh out loud. Love it.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it as I had fun with it. :). I also wanted to congratulate you on your two-year anniversary with Flash fiction! All the best in future! π Shalom to you also.
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Sounds like a great excuse for a party, Patricia.
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Thanks, Karen, for reading my story and commenting. Yes, you’re right. Perhaps the citizens of Pitfall are judging this whole curse with the wrong attitude. They should enjoy themselves more at these yearly parties. π
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Hahaha! I like it! Pretty cool story and fun! Wonderful job.
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Thanks, WM, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. It must have been really cool when it snowed that July they didn’t celebrate. π I have fun with these stories. π
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Abigail Digby Day what a fine name and that gas station attendant sprang to life too. Definitely made me smile.
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Thanks, Subroto, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I’ve met a lot of different people and those characters spring up in my imagination. That’s a plus for living a good many years and filing memories away. π
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Really loved this, and I can tell you are enjoying writing these flash fiction π
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Thank you, Maria, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I do enjoy writing these flash fiction stories. It’s good practice also as it keeps my imagination working. I also enjoy reading all the different stories written by others, no two alike. It amazes me. π
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Clever dialogue and story, PRS. Very imaginative! I really enjoyed this one. π
However, this does not sound like a character from Massachusetts… it strikes me as more Southern in accent and wording. Also, it’s still against the law to spit on the street in Massachusetts. π We Bostonians are particular to the accent.
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Thanks for reading my story Dawn and commenting. When you’re right, you’re right. I’m not too proud to admit I’m still learning. I’m glad you liked it anyway. I’m sure it’s against the law everywhere to spit on the ground, however, when we lived in NC there used to be wads of tobacco spit on the shopping center parking lot. It was disgusting. This guy could have argued that it was his gas station lot and the local chief of police was his bother-in-law. π Sorry about the accent, but maybe this guy was born and spent his childhood in the south, then went to live in MA sometime in the early 1960’s. π If you know of a resource for local U.S. accents, I’d greatly appreciate the info. I could have written “damned” but I didn’t want to offend anyone. Maybe I should have. It’s probably what that character would have said. Also, I re-blogged some info that might interest you if it’s something you don’t already have. I hope you’re feeling better. π
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Oh PRS, I’m so sorry… I did not intend to get you all worried about these details. I was being playful. I thought it was a wonderfully creative story, and while I did in fact think it sounded more southern, it is not something to worry about. As you point out, he could have moved to Pitfall, MA! π Your story is really wonderful; ignore my silly comment… I was playing aroundβ your character brought it out in me.
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Don’t worry, Dawn. It probably sounded southern because we lived in NC for some years when my children were growing up. My kids think of that city as their hometown. I still say “Hay” anymore instead of “Hi.” I really would love to find a good source on the internet for regional language. I think there must be one. If anyone wrote a book on that subject for writers, it would probably be a best seller. There might be one. As I remember, they used to say “doggone” in Ohio where I’m from. Of course, I was from Akron and we had a lot of people from the South who came there for work, so you heard a little of everything. You’re perfectly right though that some people from MA would notice. They warn writers about that all the time. π
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Really good story! So, this “Witch” wants people to celebrate her birthday. Why not choose Halloween for her Day? That way, everyone would be happy. Maybe?
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Thanks, Nan, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. She probably was literally a witch so Halloween might have pleased her.:)
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Great fun. You’ve go to respect the wishes!
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Thanks, Patrick, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes, she meant business all right. π
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Loved it! Such a dang old bat she was!!
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Thanks, Anjana, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. It was fun to write. She made sure they would never forget her. She left a memory that stuck, even though it was an unpleasant one. π
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That’s one powerful lady. I really enjoyed this – a great idea and I could see that gas attendant clearly from your description.
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Thanks, Sarah Ann, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Abigail just wasn’t about to be forgotten. She was probably a descendant of the original New England witches. π That gas attendant also had a personality all his own. That’s what makes traveling through small towns and villages so interesting. π
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really enjoyed your story, Patricia. haha way to force people to celebrate your birthday until forever π
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Thanks, K.Z, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. They may not enjoy celebrating her birthday, but they’ll never forget. I had fun with this one. π
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Curses π
It really rolls off the tongue though – “Abigail Digby Day”. Shame they have to celebrate a birthday for such a “scary old bat”.
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Thanks, Al, for reading my story and commenting. Yes. They’re under the curse of celebrating those parties down the years. I suppose it could be worse. It would get a lot worse if they didn’t. π
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Hahaha! The name of your story made me think of the Beatles’ song “Eleanor Rigby.” I was pleased as punch to learn that Abigail was a “scary old bat.” Love the celebration as a means of warding off unseasonable weather.
Cheers!
MG
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Thanks, Marie Gail, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I guess it could be worse than a party. π I had fun with this story.
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I like your take. the appeasement twist is really nice
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Thanks, Scrbwly, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it. π
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What a fun story and so full of flavor! I love seeing all the different takes on a prompt.
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Thanks, Madison, for reading my story and commenting on it. I’m glad you liked it as I had fun writing it. π
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Ah, the power of curses.That’s one way to get a name called after you!
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Thanks, Siobhan, for reading my story and commenting. Yes. Abigail will go down in the history of that village for all the wrong reasons. She couldn’t have cared about that though. π
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Hahaha! It’s good to be a witch! I wish I had that kind of power π Wonderful story!
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Thanks, JJ, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. π The problem is that with power should come responsibility, but I doubt Abigail cared a bit about that. She must have been a very spoiled child who had to have her own way. Unfortunately she was a witch and could force her will on others. That’s a terrible combination. π¦ I think we can all be glad it’s just a story. π
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I really enjoyed this tale. I especially liked the name Abigail Digby- It’s just a lot of fun to say! The cure for the sake of a legacy is a very clever concept. Well done!
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Thanks, Adelie, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun with this story. It’s been my experience that small towns and villages are full of people with interesting stories. Maybe it’s just that you get to know them better. π
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Yes, that’s a great point! I think in small towns, people tend to live a little slower and take the time to make conversation. Much different from the hustle and bustle of a large city! I myself, prefer smaller towns! π
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abigail must be having a chuckle from beyond the grave. π
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Thanks, Plaridel, for reading my story and commenting. I guess if she can, she is. π
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Fresh take on the photo prompt! Light touch with deep underpinnings…
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Thanks, HM, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. I just tried to have fun with it. π
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Loved your take on the prompt Patricia, you kept it light yet there were darker undertones there, well done
Dee
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Thanks, Dee, for reading my story and commenting. Also, thanks for the lovely photo for the prompt. I’m glad you liked the story. I guess any story involving a witch and a curse would have darker undertones.
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It left me with visions of hell freezing over. π I loved it, Patricia.
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Thanks, Russell, for reading my story and commenting. Your comments left me once more laughing out loud. π I suppose she could cause at least part of hell to freeze over. That would cause problems for a lot of people who said they’d do certain things if that happened. π I’m really glad you liked the story. π
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Very crisp story.. Enjoyed reading it!
Thanks for stopping by earlier.
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Thanks, Stri, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. π I enjoyed writing it.
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