Copyright–Bjorn Rudberg
This is my story for Friday Fictioneers this week. This is a weekly challenge to write a story in 100 words with a beginning, middle, and end. It’s supposed to follow the picture prompt given for the week. The host for the challenge is the gracious and talented author, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week the picture is a photo supplied by Bjorn Rudberg. Thanks, Bjorn.
http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/04/23/25-april-2014/
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
THE CHOICE by P.S. Joshi
There was once a powerful king who had a beautiful but shy daughter of marriageable age. He decided to hold a dance so that she could meet eligible young men of royal blood.
The night of the dance there was a quartet of musicians who had been hired to play. Also,”married” couples had been invited. The king was no fool.
When the dance ended, the king asked his daughter if she had chosen a husband.
“Yes,” she said. “I have chosen the mandolin player.”
“Don’t fear, sire,” he said. “I am actually Prince Rudolph of the Kingdom of Orchestria.
Kingdom of Orchestria – good save, Rudolf. Your story made me laugh, so thank you for that.
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Thanks, SFF, for reading my story and commenting. I’m so glad you liked it. XD The princess is getting a smart husband. XD
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It’s a good thing he’s musical royalty. That way they get to live happily ever after four sure
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Thanks, Larry, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 From what I’ve heard, all the people of Orchestria are musical. XD
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I have chosen the mandolin player. Ha! Good for her.
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Thanks, Alicia, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 Yes, the princess is both a nice girl and a smart one. XD
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🙂 Good choice!
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Thanks, Sandra, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Wow! Your story is somewhat like a fairytale, what with the ball and the princess choosing her husband and everything, with an ending of sly humour! 🙂
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Thanks, Tinkerbelle, for reading my story and commenting. I’m happy you liked it. XD I tried my best to make it sound like a fairy tale. I’m also glad you enjoyed the ending. Of course that happened in some of the fairy tales. The man the princess, or another girl, fell in love with turned out to be a prince in disguise. Sometimes he had been turned into a frog by a witch and the girl had to kiss him to get him to change back. XD
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Haha yeah, true 🙂
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Definitely a fairy tale and one with a quick-witted main man. Love that last line.
janet
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Thanks, Janet, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes. That prince is a man of action, and musical ability. XD
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And a glib tongue.
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Yes, he’ll go far in the world of his day. The king has a jewel there. XD
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I loved that the daughter was able to choose for herself and rise above choosing a husband based on his social stature. She’ll be much happier than if she let her father call the shots. Kingdom of Orchestria = genius! He sounds like a very interesting man, and his quick wit should bring him far in life. I absolutely loved this!
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Thanks, Adelie, for reading my story and commenting. I’m happy you really liked it. XD Yes, the prince is a man who will benefit his new father-in-law. Probably the two kingdoms will now form a close alliance. This prince will no doubt some day be a powerful king and with his clever wife who knows how far he will go. XD
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I like that: “Kingdom of Orchestria.” I chuckled out loud. ;0)
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Thanks, MythRider, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. XD I had fun writing that story. XD
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Kingdom of Orchestria haha 🙂 that was a good one. very clever (i meant you– and the prince too 🙂
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Thanks, K.Z., for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 I had fun writing that story. 🙂
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Dear Patricia,
Nicely orchestrated. 😉 Clever.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 I enjoyed writing that one.
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Rochelle, I’m having trouble leaving comments on other blogs. I don’t know if I’m the only one having a problem or others are also. I type in the comment and post it but instead of posting, it disappears. Today’s the first time I’ve had that problem. It’s now 4::31 PM here in India. I’ve had this problem for about 4 hours now.
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Rochelle, my comments have stopped posting again a little while ago. It’s now 4:34 PM here in India. I don’t know how to report it.
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Patricia,
On that one I’m not sure what to tell you. About all you can do is find a contact email and hope someone listens. My experience with WordPress support has often been less than helpful. It’s very possible that for some weird reason your comments are going to other bloggers’ spam folders. I’ve infrequently found valid comments in my spam file which is why I check it on a regular basis. This may help like a band-aid helps a corpse but I don’t know what else to tell you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. This is happening on and off. I’ve told a couple of other Friday Fictioneer writers but I’ll see if I can find an email I can use if it continues.
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Lovely tale. But he’s a musician so he’s probably lying.
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Thanks, Patrick, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 I don’t know about him lying. I think he’d have to be rather stupid to lie to a king. In those days you could lose your head. Of course, I don’t know him personally as I’m just reporting what happened. He may be quite stupid. XD
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great story. just loved it. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel, for reading my story and commenting. I’m very glad you liked it. 🙂 I had fun writing that story. 🙂
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Oh, those mandolin players are a clever lot. I know several personally and they are all quick-witted. Enjoyed this little fairy tale.
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Thanks, Russell, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 I don’t know many mandolin players, but that one is an acquaintance of mine. At least since I wrote the story. XD
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Oh I guess the king was no fool either… a good way to quench that little vixen’s rebellios streak 🙂
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Thanks, Bjorn, for reading my story and commenting. The daughter with a mind of her own and the mandolin playing prince are probably a good match. XD
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Dear Patriciaruthsusan, I love your story! Cute fairytale and loads of fun! Thanks for the entertainment! Nan 🙂
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Thanks, Nan, for reading my story and commenting. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing that story. XD It may turn out to be one of my favorites. XD
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A charming and sweet fairytale! Gotta love those mandolin players in disguise 😀
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Thanks, Joanna, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes. He’s a clever, musical, and apparently lovable guy. XD
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I’m sure they’ll have musical fights too 🙂 Lovely story! And I like happy endings 🙂
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Thanks, JJ for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 They might have musical fights,but they’ll also probably have musical children one day which will add to the happy ending. XD
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I like your twist allowing the daughter to marry the man he chooses.
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Thanks, Sarah Ann, for reading my story and commenting. I’m happy you liked it. Actually, I just recorded the events. That determined girl made her own choice. XD (Twists at the end are fun. XD)
Thanks. Susan
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Thanks, Sarah Ann, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Actually that determined girl made her own choice. I just recorded it. XD (Twists are fun. XD )
Thanks. Susan
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Beautiful use of language
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Thanks, Etienne, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
Thanks. Susan
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Elegantly done. Loved th simplicity and the subtlety. 🙂
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Thanks, Yarnspinner, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 I tried to make it as much like a fairy tale as possible. 🙂
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may both kingdoms thrive and unite into one strong nation. wonderful story, Patricia. 🙂
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Thanks, Sun, for reading my story and commenting. I’m very glad you liked it. 🙂 Hopefully that’s just what will happen. 🙂
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Good story in the fairy tale tradition. Your princess clearly knows ‘quality’ when she sees (and hears) it. Or did she just go for his ‘ripped’ chords? 🙂
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Thanks, Ann, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 Maybe she liked his self-confidence. Goodness knows he had plenty of it. XD
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🙂
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A tongue in cheek rendering there!
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Thanks, Gunn, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 You could probably tell I had fun writing that story. XD
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Quite a fairy tale! Quick thinking there by Rudolph 🙂
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Thanks, Al, for reading my story and commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes, Rudolph is always ready with an answer. 🙂
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I’d go with the mandolin player too. 🙂
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Thanks, Alice, for reading my story arnd commenting. I’m glad you liked it. Yes, that mandolin player/prince had a lot of personality. XD
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