Black Hawk helicopter lifting off

This is my contribution to Mondays Finish the Story for this week. Every Monday a new picture prompt is given along with the first sentence to be used for the story. The story is to be written with only 100-150 additional words. I’ve bolded the first sentence given with the picture prompt.

The link for all other stories is as follows. Be sure to click on the little blue frog in the blue box:

Genre:  Realistic Fiction

Word Count:  147+15+2=164


Silently as the people watched, the Black Hawk helicopter lifted into the air.

Half an hour before, two men had robbed the First Savings Bank in Morristown. The sheriff had called Vern Richmond for help. Vern owned an old Black Hawk helicopter.

He’d bought it back in 1999 in a government auction and had a special building built on his property to house it.

The robbers were seen heading down Evanstown Road. Both were reported to have been shot by the bank guard.

Two deputies were directed to follow in the cruiser while the sheriff flew with Vern to locate the car.

They soon spotted it on the Evanstown Road near where it branched off to Pinkerton. It was pulled off to the side, and both men were lying on the ground. When they heard the helicopter, one got up and raised his hands. Vern landed, and the sheriff raised his gun and climbed out. “End of the line boys,”  he said.

Symbol for Monday's Finish the Story

14 thoughts on “THE ROBBERY

    • Thanks Bjorn. There are times many of us wish we could just whisk off somewhere in a helicopter instead of fighting traffic. You never know what citizens have stashed away. I guess that would have been classified army surplus. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne


    • Hello Michael, and thanks. You’re right. Crooks would be no match for a helicopter. There’ve been times when I wished I could go places by helicopter. No traffic jams. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne


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