We’re gathered together again this week in a virtual old cafe along Historic Route 66. Our hostess is gracious and talented author and artist Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re here again to discuss our original stories for the week as the Friday Fictioneers. The challenge for this group is for each of us to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Jean L. Hays. Thanks Jean.
The link for all other stories is as follows. Be sure to click on the little blue frog in the blue box:
http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/01/07/2-january-2015/
Genre: Nonfiction
Word Count: 100 Words
HISTORIC ROUTE 66 By P.S. Joshi
In the gap year our son took between high and college, he and a friend decided to travel Route 66. They had it planned. The friend had a new van, and they decided to tent camp when they could.
They didn’t go all the way to LA, but did see some sights such as the Grand Canyon and some of the old memorabilia along the way.
Coming back, our son was driving and started to doze off. By the time the police car pulled him over, his speed was in the 90’s. The officer had saved their lives.
Rte 66 is legendary in the US. I’ve lived on it twice in two different states. Thanks for the memory.
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Thanks Diana. It must have been interesting living on that historic route. This must have been the route my brother drove back in 1953 when my mother and I traveled to LA with him. I was a child and didn’t think of it at the time. He must have took a detour though, because we went to Las Vegas and that wasn’t on the route. We needed some relief as we had crossed the desert in the hotest part of the day due to the fact my brother had to be back at work the next day. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Great memories there. Thank heaven for the cops.
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Thanks Patrick. He wasn’t far from reaching home. He got a ticket and had to go to court, but we told him he should thank that policeman. The man did indeed save both their lives. They were passing nearby a town and the police watched that part of the expressway. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I hope that’s not true but if so, what a blessing the highway patrol came along.
janet
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Thanks Janet. It was true. Our son got a ticket and had to go to court. But we told him he should thank that policeman, because he saved both their lives. It was near a town and the police kept a watch on that section of expressway. The boys weren’t far from reaching home. — Suzanne
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Dear Susan,
I braced myself for a tragic end. Phew! I’m relieved. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. It would have indeed been a tragic end. Our son’s had two friends die in car accidents since then. He had kept driving even though he was tired because they were nearing home. — Suzanne
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In the southwest Route 66 has many miles of flat “nothingness” terrain and it is easy to get into a trance and drive at high speeds without realizing it. Thank goodness for the state patrol!
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Thanks Priceless. Actually, our son was back in North Carolina, in the Piedmont area, and nearing home. That was why he had kept driving even though he was tired. It was night, so there was more of a chance of dozing off. — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne for explaining this to me. ((Hugs))
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You’re very welcome. Hugs back. 🙂 — Suzanne
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sometimes a speeding ticket is worth every cent.. and those roads are dangerous … I have traveled a little bit when I lived in Arizona.
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Thanks Bjorn. Acutally that happened when the boys were back in the Piedmont area of North Carolina. They were not far from home so our son kept driving even though he was tired and it was night. — Suzanne
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Susan,
it sounds like we had similar ideas this week, although your story turns out better for most of them. That is a lucky break the police officer caught them. I know how dangerous it can be to drive drowsy.
-David
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Thanks David. I’m going to go and read other stories. Yes, it was certainly a good thing the policeman caught them. Our son made the mistake of keeping on driving because they were almost home. As he was falling asleep, his foot was pressing the foot pedal farther down. — Suzanne
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Long, empty roads, and lack of rest – a recipe for disaster. Your story touches a very sensitive parental nerve. Well told.
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Thanks Marg. Our son and his friend were nearing home so kept going. even though they were tired and it was dark. I know what a serious problem it is. Our son has had two friends die in auto accidents since then. He seemed to have learned a valuable lesson from the experience. — Suzanne
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Damn kids. I swear sometimes I don’t even want to know!
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Thanks Dawn. I know. It’s heartbreaking. Our son’s lost two friends in auto accidents since then. He was usually a careful driver, but they were nearing home so he kept going even though he was tired and it was dark. — Suzanne
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That was a lucky escape! When I read “started to doze off” I feared the worst.
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Thanks Ali. I know, it could have proved tragic it not for the policeman stopping them. Thats why we told our son to thank the policeman who stopped them even though our son got a ticket and had to go to court. — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
I’m with Rochelle. Thought he was headed for a bad end. Thanks for the tale.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks Doug. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, it was a happy ending even though he got a ticket and had to go to court. Aloha to you also. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I was so happy to read the final line. 🙂
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Thanks Yarnspinnerr. Yes, it was a happy ending even though our son got a speeding ticket and had to go to court. The policeman had saved the boy’s lives. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Wow, that certainly has a ring of truth to it. Very scary.
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Thanks Kirizar. It really happened. If not for the policeman stopping them when they were speeding, it could have had a tragic outcome. Our son was falling asleep at the wheel. — Suzanne
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I nodded off behind the wheel once and the guardrail of a bridge woke me up. I was thankful hit the abutment leading up to the bridge or I wouldn’t be here today. A great true story, Suzanne. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Thanks Russell. Glad too you were okay and that you liked the story. My dad fell asleep one time on a viaduct and was fortunate to hit one of the suppots that was sturdy. Mom didn’t know he was asleep because his eyes were open. She was amazed he could actually sleep with his eyes open. I started to doze off once on an “S” curve and almost went into a lake. At the last minute I came fully awake and swerved back onto the road. I never drove when I was that tired again. I also never told my parents about that little incident. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Like Rochelle I was waiting for tragedy. Thank goodness for a watchful policeman.
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Thanks Alicia. Yes, thank goodness. It was worth the ticket and court appearance. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I know so many people who have had this happen… often in Kansas! 😉 Such a realistic, gentle story, with a happy ending. Nice job, Suzanne.
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Thanks Dawn. It almost happened to me once when I was in college. It was on an “S” curve. I started to doze off and almost ended up in a lake. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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So scary, Suzanne. Was he going 90 when he was dosing off? He is extremely lucky. Thanks for sharing your story. I almost drove off a cliff once. I must have been saved by angels!
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Thanks Amy. Yes, his foot was pressing harder and harder as he dozed off. I think his guardian angel was hard at work as was the policeman. I was dozing off once on an “S” curve and almost went in a lake. Probably a lot of people have had close escapes. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It’s so easily done. I’ve almost done it myself so pulled over and slept for almost an hour. Very true to life Suzanne.
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Thanks Sandra. The boys were almost home so kept going. Bad mistake. It is best to pull in somewhre and take a nap when you’re that tired. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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So close to tragedy, Suzanne. Thank goodness for that policeman. A hard lesson for your son, no doubt! Well told 🙂
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Thanks Siobhan. Yes, he didn’t especially like getting the ticket and going to court. My husband went with him. I’m sure he learned a lesson from it. We told him to thank the policeman who saved his life. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice story about an obviously wonderful trip, plus a cautionary ending. Glad it came out all right. May I go along next time?
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Thanks Perry. It was a great trip for my son and his friend. My son had been planning it for some time. We were all glad it came out all right. You’d have to ask my son about a trip, but I doubt he’ll take that one again. Most trips he takes these days are for his job or with his family. He did come to India by himself about a year ago. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh my goodness,Suzanne 😦 It’s a wonder, sometimes, that any of us made it through our teens. I’m sure the ticket carried a huge fine, too.
Ellespeth
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Thanks Ellespeth. The ticket cost money, and I seem to remember the car insurance increased also. It does when there’s a problem like that. We were just glad the policeman stopped him that it seemed worth it at the time. You’re right. Many of us come close to disaster when we’re young. I started to doze off once driving home from college and almost went into a lake. Something about the car’s movement, or something else, jerked me back awake. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nicely told Suzanne. I am so pleased the bad ending I was expecting was averted by a policeman, just doing his job, but saving the life of your son in the process.
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Thanks Dee. That’s very true. We were so fortunate he was there doing his job. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Lucky man, I am glad that he survived the nap. Plus you miss all the great scenery when you sleep drive through the highway.
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Thanks Subroto. We were all glad he survived. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Sometimes a speeding ticket is just what we need! I love the song and TV show, too. And we travelled a bit of Route 66 when we were coming home from Arizona last year.
Lily
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Thanks Lily. Yes, a speeding ticket is sometimes needed. I also loved the song and TV show. Route 66 must have been mostly what my brother took when he drove with my mom and me to LA in the 50’s.
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Great story, Suzanne. I’m glad it had a happy ending. I’m always amazed at what you can do with 100 words.
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Thanks M. It’s become easier for me to write flash fiction than the longer short stories. I want very much to write the longer stories though. Both kinds take practice though. I’m so glad you liked the story. I love happy endings also, especially that one. It was true, and he policeman saved the boy’s lives. 🙂 — Suzanne
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