Copyright: Raina Ng
Here we are again this week. Today we’re in a virtual model home and sitting in the kitchen. We’re here to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneer’s group. Our hostess for this gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us is to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was chosen from one used before, so is a repeat for some of us. It was supplied then by Raina Ng. Thanks, Raina.
To read the other stories from group members, just click on the little blue frog in the blue box, after clicking on the link. The link for the other stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/06/10/12-june-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
NEWLYWEDS by P.S. Joshi
A pair of newlyweds is strolling through a model home in a new development. Let’s listen in.
“Oh Henry, this is lovely. What room is this?”
“I think this is the kitchen, Laura. It looks something like the place where Mom cooks our food.”
“Oh yes, my mom cooks in a room a bit like this one. This looks a lot nicer than that kitchen though. The microwave is beautiful. I do know how to use that.”
“Well, never fear. Ha, ha. I’ll buy you the best one I can find.”
“Oh, Henry, you’re a great husband. I chose well.”
..how the perspective changes, generation to generation 🙂
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Thanks, Seumas. At least she knows how to use a microwave. We know a man who didn’t know how to use the microwave. His wife had full control of the kitchen. She was an excellent cook though. 😀 — Suzanne
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She’s easily pleased then. 🙂 They sound as though they’re off to a promising start, Suzanne. 🙂
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Thanks, Sandra. Neither of them knows much about a kitchen, so they’re at least starting even. They’re also in love, so that helps. Besides, she knows how to use a microwave. 😀 — Suzanne
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I wonder what will happen when he wants an omelette like how his mama made…That’s when the real fun with start 🙂 Funny story that shows how sheletered some people raise their kids into clueless adults.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I guess after a few burned ones, she’ll learn eventually. She can always make hard boiled eggs in the microwave. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I love to write the funny ones. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha ha. What a great story. Amazing how much you implied without having to say it. Well done, Suzanne. Another excellent piece of writing.
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Thanks, Diana. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I love getting the chance to write a funny one now and again. Thanks for the encouragement. 😀 — Suzanne
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A wonderful story Suzanne. May I make a correction? You are missing a period in the second to last quote. So, what happens after they move in? 🙂 ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I corrected the missing period. Thanks. Hopefully she’s a fast learner and they received cookbooks and kitchen equipment as wedding gifts. 😀 — Suzanne
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😀 Be well my friend!
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Wow, if they ever get a pot she might even learn to boil water. Of course, when you’re young and in love there are other priorities . . . .
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Thanks, Russell. You can even boil water in a microwave. He needs to buy her a good cookbook and equip their kitchen. Hopefully they got some useful wedding gifts. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh my! If he wants her to fill his mother’s shoes, she (and he) are in for quite an interesting (I could use another word) relationship. Love only carries a couple so far when expectations of the unrealistic variety abound!
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Thanks, Lorna. You’re right of course. At least she knows how to use a microwave so they won’t starve. She needs to take a cooking class. 😀 — Suzanne
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Most of us do! 😉
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🙂
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Dreamers are so cute and innocent. I say that speaking from experience, although I started cooking at the age of 12, I was naive in other areas. But that’s how we learn, by making mistakes and moving into our future. Lovely telling!!
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Thanks, Yolanda. I’m so glad you liked the story. I used to watch my mother cook, but she was a bit impatient to actually teach me. I guess she thought I could learn from a cookbook the way she did. That was the way I learned. The cookbooks fortunately are so thorough these days it’s not a problem as long as a person follows directions. You’re like the Indian women. One told me she started learning at 12. Their recipes are learned by memory. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Beautifully Written
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Thanks, DeeDee. I’m happy you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Made me smile. My mother always said her mother-in-law was such a bad cook, almost anything she cooked would taste better.
Like the description of Friday Fictioneers sitting around a table! Often feels like that.
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Thanks, Phylor. I’m pleased you liked the introduction and story about the newlyweds. I enjoy writing humor and had fun with this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Deary me. Don’t they teach cookery at school any more? 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. They probably do. She probably couldn’t fit it into her schedule and just thought, “How hard could it be?” 😀 — Suzanne
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well and good. they’re off to a good start. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I agree. They’ll be fine. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Lovely story, as always, Suzanne. But the picture of the kitchen really grabbed me. It’s so full of character. Is it your kitchen?
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Thanks, Rosanna. I’m so pleased you liked the story. It is a lovely kitchen. People who write for Friday Fictioneers send in those pictures, and the host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, decides which one to use each week. That picture was one she first used once before. It was sent in by a lady named Raina Ng. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Well chosen is the best! 🙂
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Thanks, Joy. You’re right, and I agree. 😀 — Suzanne
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Loved the listening-in aspect of your story. Saw some old pictures of my sister-in-law and her husband in the garden of their first house and they did look like children playing at being married. I guess you can learn together. And thank goodness for microwaves!
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Thanks, M.J. I’m so glad you liked the story. I guess that story sounds more like it took place some years ago. Many young people used to marry younger then. Many, especially the girls, married right after high school. They looked young because they were young. I agree about the microwaves. They’re great, especially for reheating leftovers. 😀 — Suzanne
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I remember when we got our microwave. We didn’t need it before we got it but we couldn’t live without it afterwards. 🙂 But that’s life. Nice story, Suzanne.
-David
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Thanks, David. The same thing happened with our family, Once you get one, you wonder how you got along without it. I’m so happy you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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If she knows how to use the microwave, she can cook anything! If she fouls something up. She can make it again in seconds. It’s fun to see the beginnings of a relationship. Nice one, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Amy. You’re right. I especially liked the great way ours defrosted things. I had a big one I used to defrost the Thanksgiving turkey in. I think they’ll be just fine. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I think I am pretty handy in the kitchen but this week while buying Indian groceries I was struck by the vast range of prepackaged ready to eat food that is available these days. It sees that all one needs nowadays is the ability of operate a microwave. Nice one.
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Thanks, Subroto. Someone once told me that you don’t have to know how to cook to fix a meal. Some still, like you and my son, like to cook and that’s even better. I’m so glad you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I would think it’s better that the husband learn to cook himself…
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Thanks, Bjorn. You have a good point there. My son loves to cook and is good at it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I guess it will be a learning experience…for both!
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Thanks, Dale. I’m sure you’re right. It’ll also help them mature a bit. Life has a way of doing that. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, my, young and in love – and much to learn!
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Thanks, Alicia. Yes, and they will. 🙂 — Suzanne
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They’re in for a big shock, I suspect. I hope they’re up to the challenge. Nice dialogue – shows their relationship and outlook.
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Thanks, Marg. Yes, they’re got a lot to learn. At least they’re starting out even. I’m happy you liked the story, especially the dialogue. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Cute story. I think they have a lot to learn but I think they’ll enjoy their discoveries.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, they have much to learn. At least they’re starting out even and have a microwave. 😀 — Suzanne
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Whilst I know how to use all the cooking implements in my kitchen, for some reason my wife prefers I not apply this knowledge.
Nice work 🙂
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Thanks, KT. It’s nice to know, but perhaps you better go along with you wife on that one. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne, Great story and I loved your set up to the story. Excellent! Nan
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Thanks, Nan. I’m so pleased you liked the story, especially the way I began it. Thanks for the encouragement. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear god. I’m thinking that dinner will end up more take-away than home cooked meal for these newly weds. They sound as bad as each other
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Thanks, Weltchy. At least their’re starting out together on the same level. They’ll learn. And, they have a microwave. 😀 — Suzanne
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