Photo Copyright: Barbara W. Beacham
This is my contribution for this week to Momday’s Finish the Story, hosted by Barbara W. Beacham. Every Monday, Barbara supplies a new picture prompt along with the first sentence for the story. The original story to be written should have only 100 to 150 additional words. I’ve bolded the first sentence given with the picture prompt.
This week, the first sentence was contributed by one of the writers, Alistair Phillips. A big thanks to both Barbara and Ali this week.
Be sure to click on the little blue frog in the blue box, after clicking on the link, to read the other stories. The link for all other stories this week is as follows:
https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/07/06/mondays-finish-the-story-july-6th-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 3+14+148=165 Words
HERMIONIE’S HOPPING HEDGE by P.S. Joshi
The barista shook his head. “That hedge couldn’t have moved closer overnight. Could it?”
Hermionie Pipdittle was the local sorceress-in-residence. She wasn’t a malicious spell-caster, in fact, quite spirited and jolly.
Now aging, she worried her spells might be weakening, so sought something to practice on.
People wouldn’t do. Dixie Pringle had been furious when she’d turned orange that time. All she was meant to turn was a delicate pink, hardly noticable on a sunny day.
Then there was Harold Knickerbocker, a sound sleeper, whose wife called the hospital to have him declared dead when he turned gray one afternoon.
Oh, and there was also the unfortunate case of Latitia Markbottom who grew those elm branches from her head.
The local inn had an artistically-cut, though boring, hedge designed to attract tourists. It needed something to liven it up.
Hermionie waved her wand. “Jumpytitis,” she shouted.
The hedge hopped a bit, nothing spectacular. It hopped again, and again, and again. “Perfect.”
Love the names! It sounds like Ms Pipdittle’s spells don’t always turn out the way she intended 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. That’s true. Hermionie tries and has good intentions, but things often go wrong. I’m glad you liked the names. I had fun with that story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Loved this one. It read like a cross between Enid Blyton and J.K. Rowling.
Great write.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so happy you loved the story. I’m honored you compared me with Enid Blyton and J.K. Rowling. Wow. I did enjoy writing this story. I thought I’d answered your comment before, but found no answer so I’m doing it again. Sometimes these comments seem magical and disappear into thin air.. 😀 — Suzanne
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This post reminded me of my childhood …
You really excelled on this one. 🙂
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so glad I brought back happy memories for you. 🙂
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Charming, Suzanne! The names made me laugh. Have you considered writing children’s stories??? You have a magical imagination.
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Thanks, Diana. I’m so pleased you liked my story and found it funny. I enjoyed writing it. I have thought about writing for children. I thought I’d already answered your comment, but couldn’t find my answer, so wrote another one. I think there’s some magic in the air. 😀 — Suzanne
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Definitely magic in the air!
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Lovely. I agree about the names. Not a bad idea to explore children’s writing. Suzanne, I had lost track of you blog as when you left comments in mine the address that appeared didn’t lead here. Not sure if it’s the Gravatar, but might be worth checking, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Olga. I’m fairly sure I answered your comment, but my answer seems to have disappeared. That’s almost as strange as a hopping hedge. I’m so pleased you liked the story, especially the names. I have considered writing for children. I’m sorry you had trouble finding my blog. The address is https://patriciaruthsusan.wordpress.com 😀 — Suzanne
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Cute story Suzanne!! The hopping bushes!
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Thanks, Joy. I’m so happy you liked the story about the hopping bushes. I thought I’d already answered your comment, but it seems my answer might have hopped away like the bushes. Strange. 😀 — Suzanne
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LOL! It’s always good to hear from you Suzanne! Your story was great!
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Loved the story Suzanne! It sure put a smile on my face, and those names are excellent! And what you did with the hedge to make it a jumping hedge is perfection. Well done my friend! Thank you for another excellent contribution to the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well… ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m so pleased you liked the story, especially the names. I’m also glad you liked the way the hedge was made to hop. I’ll be looking forward to the next prompt.You stay well also. 😀 — Suzanne
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I truly enjoyed the story. Next week will have you flying somewhere.
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m looking forward to the next prompt. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Love the names and love that name you used in the Friday Fictioneers story too!
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m so pleased you liked all the names. 😀 — Suzanne
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Can’t wait to see what other names you come up with in the future!
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Wonderful story… the names are as whimsical as the story!! Loved this!!!!
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Thanks, CQ. I’m so happy you loved the story, especially the names of my characters. I really enjoyed writing that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Such a lovely tale, and so unique! Whimsical is a great word! Well done!
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Thanks, Yolanda. I’m so happy you liked my whimsical story. I really enjoyed writing that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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LOL. Funny story with interesting character names. Enjoyed this piece 🙂
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, especially the names. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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