Photo Copyright: Barbara W. Beacham
This is my contribution for this week to Monday’s Finish the Story, hosted by Barbara W. Beacham. Every Monday, Barbara supplies a new picture prompt along with the first sentence for the story. The original story to be written should have only 100 to 150 additional words. I’ve bolded the first sentence given with the picture prompt.
Be sure to click on the little blue frog in the blue box, after clicking on the link, to read the other stories. The link for all the other stories is as follows:
https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/07/20/mondays-finish-the-story-july-20th-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 2+9+150=161 Words
USING IMAGINATION by P.S. Joshi
The petroglyphs told the story of an unusual event.
When caves were discovered in the state of Arizonia, some had markings on the walls, and some didn’t. Tourists in future could enrich the area.
John and George started inspecting Cave Number 10.
“John, there are no petroglyphs on these walls.”
“You have little imagination, George. I can see them.”
“Where, I don’t see even one?”
“They’re here in my mind, George, in my mind.”
With that, John pulled out small carving tools and natural paint. He first put his hand on the rock and sprayed it with paint. Next, he carved a man figure holding a spear pointed at a buffalo with large horns. Other animals and figures followed.
In the summer of 2014, Brenda led a group into Cave Number 10.
“As you see, the cave dweller drew a petroglyph of a hunt. Notice the hunter with the spear. The artist signed his work with his handprint.”
I love this Suzanne ~ Probably very true ~ A brilliant take on the prompt ~
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Thanks, John. I’m so happy you liked the story. I always trusted the science community, but sometimes you wonder. 😀 — Suzanne
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Interesting … so it’s all pretend then.
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Thanks, CAH. In my story, at least that one cave was. I always trusted, but you never know where tourist money is concerned. I’m glad you found the story interesting. 😀 — Suzanne
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A clever take on the prompt.
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Thanks, Sally. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh no! John and George are frauds and they are trying to make people think their work is ancient cave drawings. That’s pretty rotten, in my opinion. Great story Suzanne!
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Thanks, Joy. Yes, they’ll never win any awards for honesty and trust. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, Suzanne, the anthropologists would hate this post!! My folks live in Colorado where petrogyphs are historical treasures. People have a fit when they’re defaced (usually shot up with guns versus spray paint). A clever take on the prompt though. 😀
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Thanks, Diana. I know what you mean. This was meant in fun, but I also hate it when I see ancient sites defaced and/or destroyed. I can better understand the reasons it’s happening in Iraq and other parts of the Middle East, which is for religious reasons,than in western U.S. That’s just vandalism. People who vandalize are mentally twisted. Of course the radicals who do it in the Middle East are twisted also. — Suzanne
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Well done Suzanne! It makes me wonder what year they created the petroglyphs… Thanks for the story and be well… ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m pleased you liked the story. The original markings are said to be thousands of years old and no doubt are as experts have examined them. The fictional story I wrote was about two guys in modern times creating an additional cave to increase tourism. I totally respect the beliefs of tribals and ancient peoples and hope I didn’t offend anyone. I hate to hear of artifacts being vandalized and/or destroyed. —– Suzanne
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I think we all hate to see the defacing of anything historical.
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haha…Nothing like embellished Petroglyphs. Fun story!
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m so pleased you took the fictional story in the humorous way it was intended. It was totally ficticious and original petroglyphs are national treasures. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I can definitely see this happening. There will always be people who just want to make money and don’t care what cultures, beliefs and histories they trample over to do so. A great take on the prompt, Suzanne. 🙂
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Thanks, Louise. I’m so glad you took this in the spirit of fun in which I meant it, and enjoyed it. I too hate it when people visit and take advantage, especially when they carve their names on archaeological sites or deface them in some other ways. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Can’t help but laugh, worse has been done in the name of tourist money. Debunking would be harmful to poor John, he better hope a real scientist doesn’t show up. Great story!
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Thanks, Yolanda. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I hate to think of all the things that have been done to take advantage of tourists and get their money. I agree that John better hope he’s not discovered. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh John, fooling future visitors like that. I wonder, at what point does it cease to be graffiti and becomes priceless cave art? 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I know what you mean. It brings to mind those signatures of tourists in Egypt from around 200 years or more ago that are now considered part of the historical sites. 😀 — Suzanne
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Finally its all a lot of bunkum. Love it.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. That cave was, anyway. In a couple hundred years it probably won’t be. I’m glad you loved the little story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Good for him he signed with his handprints and not his name.;) Loved the fun take on the prompt which also serves as a real problem at some places.
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Thanks, Norma. I’m so pleased you liked the story. It’s a real shame some people don’t respect artifacts just because they’re in a natural setting. Not everything should have to be behind glass. —— Suzanne
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As they say – common sense is not common, I believe sense also comes to a few sensible people. 😉
What can one do about it? 🙂
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Thanks, Norma. It seems to be true and there’s little we can do about it. 😀 — Suzanne
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No doubt this could definitely happen… everyone wants to make a quick buck. Wonderful take on the prompt.
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Thanks, CQ. You’re right of course. Almost anything is possible when money is involved. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That was nice. The attention to details in the petroglyphs is well noticed! good one.. 🙂 enjoyed reading it..
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Thanks, Prakash. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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