Photo Copyright: Barbara W. Beacham
This is my contribution for this week to Monday’s Finish the Story. It’s hosted each week by Barbara W. Beacham. Every Monday, Barbara supplies a new picture prompt along with the first sentence for the story. The original story to be written should have only 100 to 150 additional words. I’ve bolded the sentence given with the picture prompt.
To read the other stories from group members, be sure to click on the little blue frog in the blue box, after clicking on the link. The link for all other stories this week is as follows:
https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/09/21/mondays-finish-the-story-sept-21st-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 2+6+150=158 Words
THE WALKWAY by P.S. Joshi
She lived in a mango tree. At least sometimes it seemed that way. A writer, Marilyn had the little tree house built for her needs.
It was okay until it rained, as the bathroom was in the main house. She needed a covered walkway so she wouldn’t get half drowned during storms.
One day there was a glow, and a beautiful fairy with a wand appeared.
“I’m your fairy godmother,” she said. “Do you desire a handsome prince?”
“No,” Marilyn replied, “I’m married.”
“Now I’m confused,” said the fairy. “Why was I called?”
“Well, I didn’t call you. Unless….”
“Yes,” said the fairy.
“I could use a covered walkway to the house.”
“Is that all? Why?” asked the fairy. “I’m not a builder.”
“There’s no bathroom here and it’s raining.”
“Oh, all right,” said the fairy. She reluctantly waved the wand, and the walkway appeared.
“Thank you,” said Marilyn
“You’re welcome,” said the fairy, and disappeared.
I like the humour in it, as well as the fairy godmother. cheers! 🙂
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Thanks, LLM. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. I thought I’d give the fairy godmother a little personality. They usually don’t have much. 😀 — Suzanne
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LOL! It would be nice to have a fairy godmother who could just wave a wand and make my dreams come true. 🙂 Great story Suzanne!
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Thanks, Joy. Most of us could probably find a use for a fairy godmother. I’m so happy you liked the stroy. 😀 — Suzanne
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Very grudging fairy, but at least she got the job done! It can’t all be about princes and princesses 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. You’re right. There are many other uses a fairy godmother could be put to. Times have changed. 😀 — Suzanne
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I need a fairy godmother. There’s no walkway from my writing room to the bathroom! Cute story. Wish it were true 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. Next time I see her, I’ll send her your way. I’m pleased you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Loved your story, but you should have had her build a bathroom in the treehouse. LOL
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Thanks, Susan. That would have probably been an even better solution. She should have been able to handle a plumbing problem. I’m so pleased you like the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I want one please. Lovely story.
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Thanks, CAH. Just to make sure when your order is placed, was that one walkway or one fairy godmother? I’m so happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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One fairy godmother.
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I like the bend your characters take towards the pragmatic here. So counter-intuitive for me, the reader. Kept me guessing. very nice.
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Thanks, T.N., I’m so pleased you liked the way I wrote the story. I loved giving the fairy some personality. It was fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Now that’s what I like…a no-nonsense woman. That’s all a writer needs…a place to write and a covered walkway to get to the bathroom. oh, and maybe a never ending supply of coffee and the odd chocolate or three 😉
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Thanks, Lyn. Yes, she’s happy with the basics. That tree house is pretty nice though. She was even able to get the fairy to see her point of view. I’m really happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Well done Suzanne! I truly enjoyed this story! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. I enjoy these challenges. I hope you’re soon on the way to health also. 🙂 — Suzanne
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