Photo Copyright: Barbara W. Beacham
This is my contribution this week to Monday’s Finish the Story, hosted by Barbara W. Beacham. Every Monday, Barbara supplies a new picture prompt along with the first sentence for the story. The original story to be written should have only 100 to 150 additional words. I’ve bolded the first sentence given with the picture prompt.
To read the other stories written by group members, be sure to click first on the link given, and then on the little blue frog in the blue box. The link for all other stories is as follows:
https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/10/12/mondays-finish-the-story-oct-12th-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 4+8+148=160 Words
TIPTOE THE WATCH CAT by P.S. Joshi
“Now this is living the life of Riley,” thought Tiptoe as he rolled onto his back and stretched.
He was enjoying his daily nap. This siesta lasted from just after breakjast until lunch, and again from lunch until dinner. In-between, he was the best watch cat in town.
“Was that a disturbance?” he mumbled.
He went to look out the large living room window.
“Sure enough, there’s Dipsie the hound from next door. What’s he doing? Why the nerve of him, burying a bone right in Flo, my owner’s, front yard. It’s time for action.”
With the stealth he was famous for, Tiptoe crept out the cat door.
The next thing Dipsie knew, he had several pounds of furry, fighting cat on his back, clawing and howling.
“The heck with the bone,” thought Dipsie. He started running, yelping as he went.
Old Mr. Pinkney, Dipsie’s owner, came running with a broom. He swipped and missed.
ha ha – Nice action story from the Cat’s POV.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m really happy you liked the story. I had fun writing that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Good one.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so happy you liked it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Sounds like Tiptoe’s got everything under control – for the couple of hours a day he’s not either eating or asleep 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. That dog woke him up though, and that’s probably what made him really fierce. He hates that. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hahaha! This is such a cute story Suzanne! I love the names of the cat and dog. Wonderful story told by Tiptoe’s POV!
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Thanks, Joy.I’m so happy you enjoyed the story that much. I had fun writing it. Animals can be such characters. They have different personalities. 😀 — Suzanne
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A fun story, Suzanne! Tiptoes is a fierce watch cat indeed – when he’s awake! 🙂
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Thanks, Louise. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, Tiptoe is fierce, especially when his nap is disturbed. Dipsie made a bad mistake is disturbing him. That’s when the claws come out. 😀 — Suzanne
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I love the idea of “watch cats.” I’ve known a few. Cute story, Suzanne. 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, there are watch cats around. 😀 — Suzanne
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Tiptoe is a good watch cat when he’s not sleeping. 🙂
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Thanks, Deborah. Yes, Tiptoe is a good watch cat when he’s awake. When something wakes him like Dipsie, he’s really angry. I bet Dipsie won’t bury another bone in “that” yard. 😀 — Suzanne
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What a lovely dog and cat “tail!” I can tell you had fun with this one Suzanne! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. I appreciate your contribution. Be well… ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. You’re right, I did enjoy writing that story. I like participating in the challenge. You get well also. 🙂 — Suzanne
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