Photo Copyright: C.E. Ayr
Here we are another week. This time we’re gathered at a virtual sidewalk cafe where there’s a virtual sewer grate nearby. Our hostess for this gathering is the gracious and talented artist and author, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers, and the challenge this week, and every week, is for each of us to write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt provided for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by C.E. Ayr. Thanks, C.E.
To read the other stories from group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box. The link for the other stories this week is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/11/18/20-november-2015/
JUST A NOTE: If anyone is trying to find my Facebook page and types in “Suzanne Joshi”, when you click on the Google link, you’ll get a FB page, but for another Suzanne Joshi. Just find my tiny picture on the heading at top and click on it. You’ll then get my page. It seems the other Suzanne Joshi is deceased as her page is remembering her. As you all know, I’m still alive, at least as far as I know.
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
THE MISSING SHOE By P.S. Joshi
When we were young, Mom used to take us in the car with her shopping when Dad was at work. I especially remember one time when it was a problem.
“Listen, you girls,” Mom said, “I don’t want to be bothered until we get to the store. Both of you see if you can keep the baby entertained and quiet. He’s in his car seat so can’t get into trouble. See if you can find my good shoes back there.”
At the store, Mom parked and asked for the shoes.
Marion said, “I’m sorry, Mom, the baby threw one out.”
Ah well, mom, they didn’t bother you as asked. Lovely.
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Thanks, Patrick. That’s right, they didn’t. I’m so happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oops. Well, at least shoe-throwing kept the baby entertained, as per instructions!
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Thanks, Ali. Yep, they were told to keep him entertained. There wasn’t a sound out of him. 😀 — Suzanne
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Be careful what you wish for.
Good piece.
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Thanks, Mick. You’re right. I’m so glad you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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A real pragmatic take on this one. Simple and elegant.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Thanks for the high praise. I appreciate it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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ha ha. You can’t win by giving kids instructions. Nice one.
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Thanks, Ansumani. You’re right, giving kids instructions sometimes doesn’t work the way you want it to. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne.
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Yup. That’s what babies do. Cute story, Suzanne. My grandson and I went to the zoo this past summer and he threw his own shoe into the bears’ outdoor area. Bye-bye shoe. Needless to say, we didn’t get it back. 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. I sat and laughed out loud after reading about your grandson throwing his shoe into the bears’ outdoor area. I wonder what the keepers thought when they found it, if they found it. I don’t know if a bear would eat a shoe. Probably not if they’re well-fed. They might have played with it. I’m so happy you liked the story as I enjoyed writing it. I remembered a friend telling me it happened in their family. 😀 — Suzanne
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It was a favorite Batman Shoe. He was not a happy camper that I couldn’t go in and get it. Another lesson about life. 🙂
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I guess he thought his grandmother could do anything. 😀 — Suzanne
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My little sister was allowed to feed the bears and standing with a piece of bread in her right hand and her wool-cap in the left, she decided it was time to try if she was left-handed.. but she the bear-warden got the cap back…
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Thanks, Bjorn. That’s funny. I’m glad she got her cap back. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, that’s so cute. You were lucky to get the hat back! My hair clip ended up with the giraffes and I didn’t get that back either. 🙂
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😀
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i guess mom shouldn’t blame the kids. they were just following instructions. she probably deserved a new pair anyway. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. You’re right, Mom can’t very well blame the kids. Now she has an excuse to go shopping for a new pair. 😀 — Suzanne
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There was reason why the Mom went for shopping with kids. Clever Mum.
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Thanks, Subroto. Yes, she took them with her so she didn’t need a baby sitter. Also, now she has an excuse to buy a new pair of shoes. 😀 — Suzanne
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I enjoyed your story and I could imagine the look on the mothers face, but WE know where the missing shoe is….Enjoyed your tale Suzanne..
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Thanks, Michael. Yes, I can also imagine the look on her face. We do indeed know where that shoe is. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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So, now you know where the shoe went. Aren’t you glad that C. E. Ayr took the picture?
Randy 😉
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Thanks, Randy. Yes, I’m glad C.E. took the picture so we know where the shoe is. Happy coincidence. 😀 — Suzanne
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Fun story, and now she’ll just have to go and buy herself another pair of shoes. Sigh.
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Thanks, Margaret. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, isn’t it a shame she now has to go shopping for a new pair of shoes. 😀 — Suzanne
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And what an arm on that kid! Cute.
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Thanks, Perry. Yes, he has quite a pitching arm. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Kids, how typical, they keep throwing everything out
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Thanks, Dee. You’re right. Babies either throw things or stick them in their mouts. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
You have to keep an eye on babies. They do love to toss things, don’t they? Cute story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, babies often think up things that surpirse us. They seem to either throw things, dig in the waste can for things, or stick things in their mouths. 😀 — Suzanne
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I think the kid did just the right thing… don’t bother mom and keep the baby entertained… I guess she had to use some other pair and accept defeat.
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Well she followed directions anyway. Hopefull she had her old shoes on. 😀 — Suzanne
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Cute story. Babie love throwing things so it was a realistic scenario. Well done. 🙂
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Thanks, Susan. You’re right, babies do love to throw things. I’m so pleased you liked the story and found it realistic 😀 — Suzanne.
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Ah ha ha ha ha! You know this happened somewhere!
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Thanks, Ibeth. I knew it was bound to have happened somewhere. I remember commenting to a friend about how a shoe could have fallen out of a car, and she said it was possible. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
I’m glad to hear you’re still alive and kicking (and writing). This story reminds me of an elderly couple who took a helicopter ride. It normally cost $50, but the pilot said if they remained quiet during the entire ride it would be free. He cut loops to try and scare them and the old man fell out. When he asked the old woman why she didn’t say something she replied, “Hey, $50 bucks is $50 bucks.”
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Thanks, Russell. I’m alive, but unfortunately the woman with my same name whom I get when I Google my FB page is being remembered. so must have passed on. That was a great story about the helicopter ride. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oooh…! So the baby did it! 😀
I kid you not, Suzanne. The single shoe in the middle of the road phenomenon is something that has bugged me from the time i was a kid and into early adulthood. It’s always just one shoe; never a pair. Why??? It’s not as if someone could lose a shoe in the middle of the road and not notice it. If they were worn out, why toss just one?
Lovely entry for this challenge. Mega hugs!
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Thanks, Teagan. I wondered about that for a long time too.. A friend from a family that had four children explained it to me. Mega hugs to you also. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Babies can’t be trusted with shoes – or anything else important!
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That’s about the truth. We babyproofed our home and barricaded the waste can when our son started to be mobile. 😀 — Suzanne.
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How does a person baby-proof your whole life? Wonderful story!
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Thanks, Lorna. That’s a great question. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Right…blame the baby! Typical kids!
Oh well…now mama has no choice but to get another pair!
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Thanks, Dale. Well, that’s a good excuse as the baby isn’t aware he’s done something wrong, or at least been blamed for it. He’ll learn. Yes, mom will have to shop for a new pair of shoes. 😀 — Suzanne
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I was that baby! I threw everything!
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Thanks, Roger. You made my day. I was sitting here laughing out loud after I read your comment. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, funny how they blamed their brother. 😀
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Thanks, Lore. I guess we’ll never know for sure unless someone confesses. The baby can’t defend himself as he can’t talk yet. I’m pleased you found the story funny. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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I have a much younger sister and brother. I don’t remember looking after them at all. 🙂 What I remember is my little brother poke something into a plug in. Sparks flew! He wasn’t hurt but was badly scared. So was the dog. It took off barking. Nice to remember younger days. Thanks for bringing that back. 🙂
Lily
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Thanks, Lily. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and it brought back happy memories. I had a much older brother and I was the baby. However, I have two children who gave us a lot of enjoyment. They did and said such cute and hilarious things. 😀 — Suzanne
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Heheh, that was cute. The girls did what they were told. Oops, the baby had fun.
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Thanks, Gah. Yes, the girls obeyed, and the baby was in a tossing mood. I’m happy you liked the story. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha! That’s very funny, Suzanne. That’ something a baby would do. Whoopee! There goes the shoe, what fun!
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Thanks, Amy. Yes, babies sometimes do throw things. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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I love that writers can see a story in anything. Good job!
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Thanks, Ann. I’m so glad you liked the story, and I appreciate your encouragement. 🙂 — Suzanne
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