I’ve written this for a blog by author Teagan Geneviene about the senses. You can read her piece and find links to others in the comments at the following link:
https://teagansbooks.wordpress.com/2016/01/23/mini-series-the-senses-hearing/
RETIRED AND DECORATED By P.S. Joshi
There she sat, year in and year out, alone, decorated by nature to make the eyes glad and the nose grateful.
The old locomotive had been a majestic sight in her day. As she barrelled down the track, coal smoke rose up her mighty chimney and billowed into the air.
But she’d been retired to a side track and the flowering groundnut vine had wound around her to give her a second glory she’d not known in her working life.
From spring to mid-summer ย the vine bloomed with a canopy of fragrant lavender flowers. Butterflies and bees flitted and buzzed about and birds sang and nested. It provided both home and food.
The locomotive felt a peace she’d not know before. She was still useful.
Lovely, a second chance for the locomotive. I’m imagining such a serene scene, warm and sunny with flowers and bees all around.
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Thanks, Ali. The picture Teagan furnished on her blog was so lovely I wanted to write a piece that matched it. I’m glad you liked it so much. ๐ — Suzanne
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Suzanne this is marvelous! Such a quietly happy, satisfied feeling your story gave. Thanks for coming out to play! Mega hugs!
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Thanks, Teagan. I’m so happy you liked the story or much. I enjoyed writing this piece for your blog. The picture of the locomotive was so pretty I wanted to write a story that did it justice. Hugs to you also. ๐ — Suzanne
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The feeling of usefulness is always motivating.
Wonderful.
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Thanks, FC. I’m so glad you liked the story. Feeling useful is important. ๐ — Suzanne
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Enjoy your weekend Suzanne.
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Thanks, FC. You have a great weekend also. ๐ — Suzanne
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Wow. I love this Suzanne. Beautiful and sentimental and glorious. Well done!
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Thanks, Diana. I appreciate the great praise. Teagan’s picture was so lovely I wanted to write something that matched it. ๐ — Suzanne
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I really like this piece. The locomotive still beautiful and happy in another time of life.
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Thanks, Bernadette I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, the locomotive is still lovely and happy. ๐ — Suzanne
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Lovely piece Suzanne, serene and content. ๐
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Thanks, DG. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I wanted it to match Teagan’s picture prompt for the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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I think it was an excellent match. ๐
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Thanks, Debbie. ๐ — Suzanne
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