Photo Copyright: The Reclining Gentleman
Here we all are another week. Today we’re sitting on a virtual lawn viewing a virtual bed of daffodils and crocuses. Our hostess for this gathering is the gracious and talented author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by The Reclining Gentleman. Thanks, R.G.
To read the other stories by the group, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/02/10/12-february-2016/
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count:ย 100 Words
SPRING By P.S. Joshi
Ruth understood she might not live until spring. The doctors tried every procedure available to purge her cancer. She had to wait.
They explained if she survived until April there was hope of full remission.
Her husband and two grown children prepared. Now to her, it wasn’t a wait for the first day of April but for visible signs of spring. The watch was on for crocuses and daffodils, birds and butterflies, and rain showers.
Early one morning there they were in the prepared beds–the yellow daffodils and red crocuses. New hope surged through her. Many springs were ahead.
well done! I enjoyed it, could be worked into a longer story. ๐
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Thanks, OT. I’m really glad you enjoyed the story. I probably could make a longer story out of it. Maybe in future. ๐ — Suzanne
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good, I would like to read it
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A lovely story, ending on a hopeful note ๐
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Thanks, Ali. I’m so pleased you loved the story, especially the ending. I favor happy endings also. ๐ — Suzanne
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Here’s to good health and many more springs! Nicely done.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m so glad you liked the story. I want to see good health and more springs for all also. ๐ — Suzanne
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A feel-good story, Suzanne. Nice one.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m so pleased you liked the story. There’s so much sadness it’s great to have a feel-good story once in a while. ๐ — Suzanne
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Lovely story Suzanne, here’s to many more springs
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Thanks, Siobhan. I’m so happy you liked the story. Yes, let’s hope we all have many more springs. ๐ — Suzanne
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Flowers are quite a powerful sign of hope. St. Therese of Lisieux, the nineteenth century Doctor of the Church, was fond of using roses as her favorite symbol. Good story
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Thanks, Larry. I’m so glad you liked the story. I’ve read a couple of books about St. Therese of Lisieux one of which was her autobiography. ๐ — Suzanne
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Great, uplifting story. Hopefully there will be many more springs for her.
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Thanks, David. I’m really glad you liked the story so much. I’m sure there’ll be a great many more springs ahead for her. ๐ — Suzanne
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I love happy endings and signs of spring too. We’re supposed to have some 60 degree weather next week. It won’t be long before the flowers poke their little heads through the soil.
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Thanks, Russell. I enjoy both those things also. I miss spring as we don’t have it here. I’m so pleased you liked the story so much. ๐ — Suzanne
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Somehow I think it might have been the hope of spring that kept her going…
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Thanks, Bjorn. I think you could be right. The great desire to see spring come gave her hope and kept her going. ๐ — Suzanne
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I like this story of hope and the gentle symbol of Spring flowers.
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Thanks, Deborah. I’m so happy you liked my story of the symbol for hope being the spring flowers. ๐ — Suzanne
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Loved your story of new hope with spring. ๐
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Thanks, Susan. I’m so pleased you liked my story of new hope coming with spring, especially the flowers. ๐ — Suzanne
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That was beautiful, Suzanne. Hope. That is were true magic lives — hope. Mega hugs my friend. โค ๐
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Thanks, Teagan. I’m so glad you liked the story that much. I felt a happy ending went with spring. Hope is wonderful. Mega hugs to you also, friend, and Happy Valentines Day. โค ๐ — Suzanne
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This is so positive and hopeful. A wonderful story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Gah. I’m so happy you liked the story. I thought positive and hopeful went with spring. ๐ — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
I’m with the rest of the gang. A feel good story with an upbeat ending. We can’t have too many of those.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I love happy endings also. ๐ — Suzanne
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Positive and full of hope. A lovely story.
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Thanks, Margaret. I’m so pleased you liked it. Again, Congratulations on winning the story contest. That’s great. I hope you have a lot of shelf space. I’ve never heard of so many books being given away as a prize. You’re in for a great read. I enjoyed reading your story. I can see why it won. ๐ — Suzanne
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Thank you, again, Suzanne.
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Very hopeful. Lovely take.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story with its hopeful ending. ๐ — Suzanne
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she lives on hope. there’s nothing more that could be asked of her.
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Thanks, Plaridel. Yes, you can’t ask more than that. ๐ — Suzanne
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Hope springs eternal… Lovely, positive story!
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Thanks, Dale. Yes, that’s true. I’m so glad you liked the story with it’s positive message. ๐ — Suzanne
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A true story of spring; hope and renewal.
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Spring is always the symbol of that hope and new life.
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Such an endearing story… love the hope and anticipation in this ๐
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Thanks, Lori. I’m so pleased you liked the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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My pleasure, Suzanne!
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Really positive. And it chimes with the hopes of the la6test research results relating to fighting the big C
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Thanks, Patrick. I’m so pleased you liked the story and think it fits in with the findings on treatment of the disease. ๐ — Suzanne
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Hope blossoms with spring.
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Thanks, CAH. I’m so pleased you liked the story and think it fits the theme of spring. ๐ — Suzanne
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It really does.
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What a tearjerker of a story, Suzanne. Flowers do inspire hope, especially when facing such an awful illness. Well done.
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Thanks, Amy. I’m so pleased you liked the story even though it was sad in the beginning. ๐ — Suzanne
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