Photo Copyright: Kent Bonham
Here we all are for another week. Today we’re in a virtual city hall in a large city. Our hostess for this gathering is the talented and gracious writer and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Kent Bonham. Thanks, Kent.
To read the other stories by the group, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/13/15-april-2016/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
THE BOOK OF THE ICKYCONIANS by P.S, Joshi
If I’d known the danger I’d face, even I, Zelda Prichard, Head of the Outer Reaches Planetary Rangers, might have fled in fear.
I strode into City Hall, having only been told it was a vital mission. There I saw a seemingly alien book recently taken from the underground vaults and on display for our viewing.
The President had flown in on Space Force One and was also viewing the book for the first time. She turned to me and stressed, “Commander Prichard, it’s your official duty to return this sacred book to the Ickyconians, our sneaky, nasty sworn enemies.”
A wonderful opening line to pull the reader right into it
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Thanks, PM. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story, especially the opening line. I had fun writing it. π —- Suzanne
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Ha ha ha. I liked the ending for sure.
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Thanks, John. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. π — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Ickyconia sounds…well…icky. Why would you want their sacred book? Clever story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. They are a nasty group of aliens. The Earth probably came in possession of the sacred book when they captured some planetary thieves who’d stolen it to try and resell it, perhaps back to the Ickyconians. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. π — Suzanne
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Wonderful opening and great ending! I can hardly wait to find out Prichard’s adventures.
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Thanks, Mary. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I may have to write more of those adventures. π — Suzanne
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The imagination is in full gear, Suzanne. Loved it!
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Thanks, Diana. I’m so happy you enjoyed it, especially because you write sci-fi fantasy. I love these space adventures. I’m an old Star Trek fan. π — Suzanne
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Fun, fun, FUN! That’s what it’s all about in this story. Very enjoyable. I had to laugh because the picture I took is from my hometown’s City hall. hahahaha! Nice, Suzanne! π
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Thanks, Kent. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for explaining to us about the artwork. It’s fantastic. You can no doubt tell I had fun writing this story. π — Suzanne
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I was going to say that. Obviously, I was right. It always shows in the writing when someone enjoyed themselves. π
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π Yep.
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You certainly gave full rein to your imagination this week Suzanne. π
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, my crazy streak has to break free now and again. Also, I’m a Star Trek fan. π — Suzanne
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I will leave the mission to your heroine! too icky sticky mucky muck to manage for most folks but she might just get it done! Vivid imagination at work π
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Thanks, Emmy. I’ll leave that mission to her also. She’s accomplished difficult missions before so I have complete confidence in her. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. π — Suzanne
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I don’t envy poor Prichard, to have to deal with the Ickies. Fun story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Gah. Yes, Prichard has a tough task ahead of her. The Ickies are a nasty group. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. π — Suzanne
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Sooner her than me. The Ickyconians sound, well, icky… π
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, they’re a nasty group of aliens. Zelda has a tough task ahead of her. I’m so happy you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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Very good use of Icky.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story, especially the name of the aliens. π — Suzanne
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Yes I did. It is well thought out and beautifully crafted.
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Big fan of Zelda and even her last name…but was that a high horse I saw her having to get off or was I reading it wrong π lol. Nicely done Suzanne.
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Thanks, Ifeoma. Zelda appreciates you’re a fan. She gets a little carried away with her position once in a while, but she’s a good person to depend on when things get tough. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. π — Suzanne
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Lovely story! Hope she gets the job done safely!
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Thanks, Petruj. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. I hope she’s successful too. π — Suzanne
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it belongs to the enemy,. so why return the book when it could be held for ransom? just kidding. the president seems to be a realy nice guy.
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. Returning the book is a nasty job but someone has to do it. The president is a really nice gal. π — Suzanne
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I’m still chuckling about Space Force One. Very clever. This sounds like the start of an interesting tale. Great job, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Chris. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. I enjoyed writing it. You’re right, it’s a good hook for a longer story. π — Suzanne
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Ha.. Sounds like a suicide mission.. Love the names and the set-up. There might be some grudge between the president and Zelda.
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Thanks, Bjorn. It’s a tricky mission that’s for sure. I’m so happy you loved the story with the names and hook. I don’t think the President dislikes Zelda. She chose her because of her success with past missions. Also, perhaps no one else wanted the job. π —- Suzanne
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I love the title and the fact that the President is female.
Lily
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Thanks, Lily. I’m so happy you loved the story, the title, and the President being a female. I thought in the future there had probably been more than one female President. π — Suzanne
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Truly a fun read! Quite the task she has been given… not one I’m sure I’d like…
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Thanks, Dale. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story so much. Yes, she has a tough job ahead of her. I know I wouldn’t want it. π — Suzanne
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Ickyconians..I love that!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. π — Suzanne
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That gets the old imagination going. It sounds like a challenging mission – I hope she succeeds. A very pacy story.
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Thanks, Margaret. Yes, it’s indeed challenging as missions go. They’re a nasty group of aliens. I believe in her ability to succeed, though. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I’m working on some things in my writing including pacing. π — Suzanne
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The problem started when Sacred Book wasn’t returned back to the Ickyconian library on time. I hear the library fines are unique. Fun story Zelda.
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Thanks, Subroto. Your comment was hilarious. I sat here and laughed out loud. Although, who’s to say the Ickies don’t have a library of sorts. I’m sure whatever the fines are they’re icky. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. π — Suzanne
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Perhaps they’ve declared an amnesty on late fees….or was it that they declared war on hot dog stands?? It’s hard to read that chicken scratching. π―
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Thanks, Archon. It is hard to read their sacred book. I doubt there are many who could translate Ickyconian script. π —- Suzanne
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I do not think that I like this president, but I loved your story
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Thanks, Mike. Politics aside, the President has a part to play in the mission. The return of the book is crucial to the safety of the planet. I’m so happy you loved the story. π — Suzanne
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Hahaha! I enjoyed your story, a lot! Nicely laid out scenario, Suzanne! I’m expecting a science fiction novel to grow out of this one.
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Thanks, Vijaya. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story, especially the plot. Maybe I can think up more stories. Not to would kind of be a waste of some good nasty aliens I guess. π — Suzanne
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Haha! You’re most welcome, Suzanne!
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Clever story and great fun – I was smiling from the icky title to the very end π
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Thanks, Siobhan. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story so much., that it made you smile. I had fun writing it. π — Suzanne
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Very clever, Suzanne. I like how you brought together the familiar city hall with the otherworldly aliens, the icky, nasty sworn enemies. That made me laugh. Well done!
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Thanks, Amy. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I had fun writing that story. π — Suzanne
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