Photo Copyright: Mary Shipman
Here we all are for another week. Today we’ve gathered in a virtual small shop. Our hostess of four years this month is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Mary Shipman. Thanks, Mary.
To read the other stories by the group, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/04/27/29-april-2016/
Genre: Horror Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
THE ORIENTAL ODDITY SHOP by P.S. Joshi
On Elm Street in Wickton is a diminutive shop. Printed on a sign over the door is “Mr. Chang’s Oriental Oddity Shop”. To the ordinary person, it’s just that. To his special clients, it’s much more.
A stranger enters and hands him a card.
“Ah, yes. I have just what you need.” Chang reaches under the counter. “It is an ancient powder, guaranteed. Instructions are on the bottle label.”
Next, an old client appears. “You said this would work. It came again, bleeding from the mouth.”
“Ah,” Mr. Chang sighs, “I saw a similar case over two hundred years ago.”
Great take on the prompt, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m really pleased you liked the story, my take on the prompt. I read your two stories that won the competitions. I can see why you won. It’s lovely of you to give the good encouragement and include the judge’s explanation as to why these were chosen. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice idea – Oriental Oddity Shop. 🙂
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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🙂 Well done! I love where my photo ‘took’ you!
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Thanks, Mary for reading my story and sending in the great picture that made it and all the other entertaining stories possible. I’m so pleased you liked mine. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I could actually hear Mr Chang speaking — isn’t that strange. Great take on the prompt, Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Lyn. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story and I got a good voice for Mr. Chang. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha he gave himself away right there didn’t he? Liked that you ended it on that note. Cheers.
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Lovely idea – full of magic and mystery. Would love to visit Mr Chang’s, though I’d be very cautious of using his preparations! Nice spin on the prompt
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Thanks, Lynn. Yes, it’s an interesting place but you have to be careful. He’s a powerful sorcerer. I’d advise staying away from his clients also. I’m so pleased you liked the story, my take on the prompt. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’ll watch out for him, thanks Suzanne! And yes, a great story 🙂
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Dear Suzanne,
I can just picture Mr. Chang. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so pleased the voice was so good you could picture him. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Ifeoma. Yes, he let out how ancient he is, but his regular clients probably knew, or at least, suspected something like that. They’re all “different” in various ways. I’m so glad you liked the story, especially the ending. Cheers to you also. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ohhhhh, I shudder to think what THAT was about in that ending.
Teeeee—rrrr-ific story, Suzanne! Five out of five elixirs.
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Thanks, Kent. I don’t blame you. I’d stay far away from the thing whatever it is also. I’m so pleased you liked the story so much. This is a great complement. 😀 — Suzanne
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Fun story but remind me not to buy vanishing cream from Mr Chang.
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Thanks, Subroto. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. I agree that you shouldn’t buy vanishing cream from Mr Chang. His preperations mean business. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I’m not whether I’d want to risk one of his “preparations”, though he seems to have centuries of experience 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I think it’s wise to stay away from his preparations. They’re heavy duty. — Suzanne
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A very odd shop. Lots of mystery in there, Suzanne. Great take on the photo 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. Yes, it’s an odd shop for sure. Very creepy and full of mystery. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Reminds me a little of the beginning of Gremlins. I trust Mr.Chang, I’ll try the powder; can’t wait to see what it does!
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I hope it doesn’t turn you into a Gremlin, Perry. We’d miss you. 😦 You’re braver than me. — Suzanne
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Well done. Mr Chang certainly has a thing going here.But unlike Perry Block I’ll give it a miss.
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Thanks, Patrick. Yes, he has a thriving business built up over many years. I think I’ll give it a miss also. —- Suzanne
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Sounds like the kind of shop I would like to visit. Mr Chang certainly has experience. 🙂
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Thanks, John. Oh, yes he has experience alright. It’s a good place to visit but I wouldn’t want to shop there. —- Suzanne
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Ha ha ha. I’ll take that as a warning. 🙂
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Knew Wickton well, as for Mr Chang he was prone to sighs. ☺️
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Thanks, Mike. It’s interesting you knew Wickton and Mr. Chang. Not many know his special business, though. He does have a habit of sighing. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great final line! I half-believe Mr. Chang does remember. 🙂
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Thanks, Bun. You can believe it. He’s a powerful sorcerer and never forgets a thing. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh yes.. I think the 200 years would have taught him… hope Mr Chang had a cure for the side-effects. Love it.
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Thanks, Bjorn. Yes, over 200 years should have given him experience in curing anything including recurring evil spirits and curses. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Lightly done…horror. Loved it. One of these days I’ll return to Friday Fictioneers.
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Thanks, Hugmamma. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. I hope you do return to Friday Fictioneers one day. All prayers and good wishes for your daughter’s upcoming wedding. How wonderful. 🙂 — Suzanne
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200 years later they meet again…
NIce story, and an imaginative take
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Thanks, RG. Yes, he has some “really” old friends. I’m so happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Tee-hee!!! Delightful, Suzanne. That really is a fascinating prompt photo. I see it got your imagination in high gear. Nicely done. Huge hugs.
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Thanks, Teagan. I’m happy you enjoyed the picture and story so much. Yes, my imagination finally powered up after wondering what on earth I’d write about a store. Huge hugs back to you. 😀 — Suzanne
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Very mystical and mysterious! Great take on the prompt! 🙂
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Thanks, SW. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, my take on the prompt. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Sounds like my kind of place. Fun story!
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Thanks, Adam. Yes, it would fit right in with things you enjoy. I’m really pleased you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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how old is mr. chang? he must be really old. 🙂
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I would guess Mr. Chang is well over 200. He remembers things back that far as he was an adult even then. I wouldn’t have the nerve to ask him. 😀 — Suzanne
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Love it, Suzanne. Well, whatever powder he’s taking, it’s working on him! I love the idea of an Oriental Oddity shop where people come in with issues that need fixing.
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Thanks, Amy. Something is surely working for Mr. Chang. I must have had the movie “The Sorcerer’s Apprentice” in mind when I wrote this. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Cheers for Mr. Chang. I wonder if he sells Love Potion #9?
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Thanks, Russell. I wouldn’t be a bit surprised. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’m guessing snake oil is one of the main ingredient. Fun story Suzanne.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’ve been afraid to ask. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, how intriguing!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. 🙂 —- Suzanne
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Interesting take on this prompt. I can see the shop and hear Mr.Chang; you’ve done a wonderful job painting them for us!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m so pleased you found the story interesting and could hear Mr. Chang. What a great complement. Looks like I got the voice right on that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Such an interesting shop, I think I’ll stay away from it. Great take on the prompt, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Gah. That might be best. I’m glad you found the story interesting. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great story. Not sure I’d trust him.
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Thanks, Connie. I would be careful too. You have to be with a powerful sorcerer. 😀 — Suzanne
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