Photo Copyright: C.E. Ayr
Here we are for another week. Today we’re gathered in a virtual large city near the waterfront. There’s a virtual large building with a lighted dome. Our hostess for this group meeting is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to each write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by C.E. Ayr. Thanks, C.E. We hope your pain has lessened.
To read the other stories by the group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/05/11/13-may-2016/
Genre: Science Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
DOME RESTAURANT by P.S. Joshi
John and Louise were seated in the new, popular Dome Restaurant.
“Oh,”–Louise gazed, her eyes wide.–“this is lovely. When was it built?”
“Everyone just says it’s new. That’s it.”–His words spilled out.–“I asked several people. They all said the same.”
“Well, I was curious.”–Louise leaned forward and squeezed his hand.–“It doesn’t matter.”
It was their first anniversary and she didn’t want it spoiled.
“Attention, people of Earth.”–A voice thundered from an overhead speaker. “We will be taking off for Planet X-19 shortly. Fear not. We came in peace.”
The restaurant rose.
That’s cute. I did wonder if that ending was coming
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Thanks, Neil. I know. The top of the building looked both like a restaurant and a space ship. I was thinking also of those disguised flying saucers in the movie, “Men In Black”. It was kind of a giveaway. I’m pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne”
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That was COOL as cool is COOL! I thought of it as a fun ride, sort of. BUT — I also thought of The Twilight Zone episode, “To Serve Man.” YIKES!
Nice, Suzanne! Five out of five saucers of the flying variety! 😀
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Oooh “To Serve Man” that was an awesome episode.
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Thanks, Lyn. I wish I could remember that one. If I saw it again, it would probably all come back. 🙂 — Suzanne
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“To Serve Man.” It’s a COOKBOOK!
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Thanks, Rochelle. Well, that can’t be good. —- Suzanne
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Hahaha! YES!
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I hear Planet X-19 is lovely this time of year. So that’s cool 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Maybe it is lovely for the people of X-19. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Kent. What a great comment. I saw many of The Twilight Zone episodes but can’t remember most. I wish I could rent them somehow here but maybe later. I looked at the picture and thought saucer or restaurant so combined them. I would “never” believe an alien who said they had come in peace. Especially after the movie “Mars Attacks”. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Great story, Susan. I love going to the real Dome Restaurant. So far none of them have taken off 🙂
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Thanks, Lyn. I’ve seen a photograph of one and it looked lovely. Let’s hope they never do take off. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That’s an anniversary they won’t forget. Good thing the Aliens came in peace. I love it.
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Thanks, Gah. Yes, they’ll remember that anniversary as long as they live. Let’s hope that’s a long time. I’m so pleased you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne.
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Planet X-19 ……. good one.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story, especially the planet name. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh oh…more than they bargained for. Have they a return ticket?
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Thanks, Mick. Just offhand, I’d guess no they don’t have a ticket home. We may not see them for years. Let’s hope they’re returned. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I am not sure they come in peace, Planet X-19 has history. Like
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Thanks, Mike. I think the same. It’s too much like a kidnapping to seem peaceful. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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oh, sure, they did come in peace. i wonder how much the couple pay for their meals. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m afraid this meal is going to cost them more than money. Time will tell. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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This will be an anniversary to remember. Nice, Suzanne.
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Thanks, John. Yes, this is going to be memorable in more ways than one. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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🙂
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haha cool story. I liked the ending line : “The restruant rose”.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story, especially the end. 😀 — Suzanne
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Well, Happy First Anniversary! Hope they will be back sooner than some of the humans in Close Encounters of the Third Kind.
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Thanks, Perry. Yes, they may spend a portion of their married life off planet. I’ve always loved that scene in “Close Encounters of the Third Kind” where the captives from previous years walk off the ship. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Was it the Bistromath? (Google it if you don’t know the reference). I guess he picked the wrong time to check out the new restaurant. Or perhaps the perfect if they want a trip of their life times.
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Thanks, Trent. I looked up the Bistromath. That’s a really cool ship. I don’t think the Dome Restaurant is the same though it may be similar in some ways. Yes, they did pick the wrong time as I don’t think they were prepared for a trip off the planet. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A floating restaurant! I wonder what’s on the menu. Fun story.
Lily
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Thanks, Lily. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. Actually, it’s more of a takeoff and fly restaurant. I’m not sure what’s on the menu, but I’m sure it’s interesting. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Surprise! lol
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Thanks, Dawn. I so happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Very nice take on the prompt. I hope it proves to be a wonderful experience for them.
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Thanks, Lucky. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I hope it’s a great experience also. You just never know when you’re taken by aliens. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Now that’s going to be one memorable first anniversary. Unless they really came in piece and not peace. 😉 Clever story. I’m kind of surprised at how many saw that arena as a space ship.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I thought it also looked like one of those rotating restaurants. I think the circular shape make people think of a flying saucer. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh, that was such an enjoyable story! I could picture the “restaurant” taking off and those words, “We came in peace,” thundering over them all. Well-done!
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Thanks, Vijaya. I’m so pleased you liked the story especially the saucer taking of and the alien’s announcement. I thought the picture looked both like a flying saucer and a rotating restaurant so combined the two. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It was a wryly funny scene!
And you’re most welcome!
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It’s the spaceship restaurant. I love it, Suzanne! It seems that wouldn’t be a bad way to take a trip. At least it’s not on an empty stomach. 🙂 Great story!
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Thanks, Amy. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Depending how the aliens treated you, it wouldn’t be a bad way to travel. 🙂 — Suzanne
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