Photo Copyright: Rich Voza
Here we are for another week. Today we’re sitting on a virtual runway near an old WWII aircraft. Our hostess for this weekly gathering is the talented and gracious writer and artist, Rochelle Wisoff Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words not including the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was requested by C.E. Ayr and supplied by Rich Voza. Thanks, C.E.,ย and Rich.
To read the other stories by the group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/06/22/24-june-2016/
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
ONE LAST TIME by P.S. Joshi
The WWII fighter plane the Grumman F6F Hellcat was sitting on the runway near the hanger. It was due to make its last flight in the air show the next day. Its WWII pilot, Col. George Pringle, Rtd. was supposed to be present. It was all ready to go.
The night before the flight a call was received at the local U.S. Air Force office. Sadly, Col. Pringle had died suddenly that day.
The next morning the plane was found to have been flown.
“Well,” said an old buddy. “George flew her one last time.”
Is it a true story ? Great.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. No, this isn’t real, just realistic fiction. I’m so pleased you liked the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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Spooky
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Thanks, Neil. I hope you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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Whoa. Spine-tingly. Great little (possible) ghost story ๐
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Thanks, Jade. I’m happy you enjoyed this little ghost story. ๐ — Suzanne
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There has to be a last time hasn’t it… dead or alive.. one last time on it’s wings.
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Thanks, Bjorn. Yep, it had to be the last time they were together. I’m so happy you enjoyed it. ๐ — Suzanne
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Good one, Suzanne
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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Oh, I’m so glad George managed to fly the old girl one last time, and both of them finally retired together. I found that strangely touching, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Lyn. I’m so happy you liked the story about them both flying together one last time. Those kinds of stories touch me also when I read them. ๐ — Suzanne
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Ahhh, pure GREAT, Suzanne! Has a poignant ending. Our friend in the “author world,” Kathleen Rogers, has a beautiful poem called The Lady Let Him Fly. Rochelle’s husband, Jan, and I read it and we got tears in our eyes.
My dad’s a WWII veteran (Navy) and I have been trying to get him to go on the Honor Flight, but he’s kind of ambivalent about it. We’ll see. Maybe for his 90th birthday (he still drives and does crossword puzzles and was named Citizen Of the Year at the Chamber of Commerce in January — we should live so long!).
Five out of five super sonics! ๐
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Thanks, Kent. What a great comment! Your dad sounds like quite a guy. My brother was twenty years older than me and was a U.S. Navy veteran who served in WWII. He served on board aircraft carriers. He was a Chief Petty Officer when he left the Navy and went back to college on the GI Bill. He told me later he kind of wished he’d stayed in the Navy. My dad was a U.S. Navy veteran who served in WWI. He served on board an old battleship that was made into a troop transport. It sailed between NYC and Brest, France. He loved his time in the navy. I have a lot of old pictures. When he left the navy, he was a Chief Boatswain’s Mate. I’m happy you enjoyed my little story. ๐ — Suzanne
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I did and what a history your brother had! My dad was only in toward the end, but was in for several months before he got injured on the ship and they had to discharge him. Got the purple heart and everything, but my grandpa, dad, uncle and cousin all served during wartime. I went in the National Guard for training just before Desert Storm, but I never got sent there.
Anyway, great story!
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It’s too bad you dad was wounded but great he survived. The first carrier my brother was on was sunk but the men were taken off by another ship and then taken to an island, I think it was Efate until they could be reassigned. Dessert Storm was the war I was worried about. My son was graduating in 1994 and I was afraid if it went on for a number of years he might be drafted. A couple of his friends joined the army and were sent to Iraq. After their tours of duty were up they came home safe and sound.
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My mom’s cousin who lived with them got pneumonia and had to stay behind. The sub he was stationed on got depth-charged and all were lost. As for Iraq, I could have very easily and willingly gone (fresh out of boot), but in the National Guard, they had to deploy a whole division instead of a few individuals. So, by the time I got out of boot camp, it was pretty much over. They didn’t need us.
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Sweet and spooky ๐
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Thanks, Ali. I’m happy you liked the story. I was trying for sweet and a bit spooky. ๐ — Suzanne
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Lovely story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m so pleased you liked the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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A wonderful poignant story, Suzanne. I think these things happen sometimes. ๐
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Thanks, Diana. I wouldn’t be a bit surprised. Well, okay, a little bit surprised, but I think it could. I’m pleased you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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Great story, I like it very much, it is so full of opportunity.
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Thanks, Michael. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed writing it. ๐ — Suzanne
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anything is impossible. there are things in life that defy explanation.
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Thanks, Plaridel. You’re perfectly right. Strange things do happen in life. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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Wow! You managed to say so much with the last line! The story had a wonderfully poignant and ghostly feel to it! ๐
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Thanks, SW. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story, and that I achieved what I was trying for. ๐ — Suzanne
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Haunting tale! Makes me think of one’s spirit returning {at death} to the place that was most important during their lives. In that vein…I wonder where we all would end up.
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Thanks, MW. I’m pleased you liked the story. If my spirit returns to my most important place it would probably be the house where I was born. It’s the only old address I can remember. I suppose that’s because I memorized it when I was very young. ๐ — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Sweet and haunting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so pleased you liked the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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The co-pilot must have been spooked. Col Pringle has been known to fly even when the chips are down.
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Wow, Subroto, you sound like you heard stories about the old fellow or read a book about him. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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I loved the ending. It gave me goosebumps.
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Thanks, Russell. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much, especially the ending, and I achieved the result I was trying for. ๐ — Suzanne
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That’s lovely. Goosebumps, me too.
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Thanks, Patrick. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and I got the effect I was trying for. ๐ — Suzanne
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Fun ghost story. One last flight.
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Thanks, Anne. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. ๐ — Suzanne
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What a sweet and touching story. I’m sure the old plane enjoyed being taken out one last time.
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Thanks, Gah. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I imagine the plane did enjoy that last flight. ๐ — Suzanne
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