Photo Copyright: Sandra Crook
Here we are for another week. Today we’re revisiting a busy road with a lot of sheep in front of and hindering the progress of a car. Our hostess for this weekly gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words not including the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt is a rerun taken by Sandra Crook and requested by Jennifer Pendergast. Thanks, Sandra, and Jennifer. Here then is the same story I wrote the first time plus a few tiny changes.
To read the other stories by the group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/07/13/15-july-2016/
Genre: Fantasy Humor
Word Count: 100 Words
BO PEEP’S PROBLEM by P.S. Joshi
Bo Peep was crying and wringing her hands. She had lost her whole flock of sheep. She’d searched high and low, back and forth.
Whatever would she do? Her family depended on her. She’d never been in such trouble.
Until evening, everything had been fine. Then they disappeared. She thought she heard them so where could they be?
Little Boy Blue came along and offered to help. She explained her problem.
He went, looked around, and came back to her.
“Peep,” he said. “aren’t those the sheep over there?”
“Where?” she asked.
He shook his head. “You need glasses, Peep.”
Very very very very very cute!
Wonderful adaptation of the rhyme!
Well done, Suzanne!
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Wow, thanks, Sabina. I’m really happy you enjoyed the story so much. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Nice take on the prompt, Suzanne. 🙂
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m happy you liked the story. Thanks again for the great picture. 😀 — Suzanne
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Boy am I glad the sheep wasn’t really lost.
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Thanks, Chioma. Nope. She just suffered from night blindness. I’m happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great fun
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Thanks, Neil. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Poor Peep, maybe she should some bells around their necks or something 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, she needed help. The glasses will no doubt help. I’m happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Wow, and I thought *my* eyesight was bad! Fun take on the prompt, and on the nursery rhyme too.
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Thanks, Joy. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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How lovely to read something light. It’s left me with a great big smile Suzanne.
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Thanks, Louise. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you smile. I had fun with this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Nice twist on the story prompt. Poor old Bo Peep better get to the optician before she loses those sheep for good!
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Thanks, Lynn. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the end twist. Yes, she really needs glasses. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Haha! She really does 🙂
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I think she need very very thick glasses… wonderful fun take on the prompt… love the names btw
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Thanks, Bjorn. You’re right. She really needs strong glasses. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much, especially the names. 😀 — Suzanne
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Aha! That explains it. Cute story, Suzanne. That’s a lot of sheep to misplace!
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Thanks, Diana. Yes, that explained everything. You can see why she was worried. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha..cute story.
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I remember this from last time, although, for the life of me I can’t remember my title nor can I find my story. This made me smile the first time I read it and this time, too. Thanks.
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Thanks, Alicia. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you smile both times. Two years is a long time Isn’t it. I sometimes have trouble finding things I’ve tucked away in the documents part of my laptop. It’s hard when you forgot what you filed it under. I can’t resist free downloads so I have a big file. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
I remember this one. Liked it then, like it now. Cute story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m happy you still like it. I doubted I could do better so I repeated it. 😀 — Suzanne
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A simple and elegant take. Great write.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the great comment. I appreciate it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Heh, a whimsical peep 😉
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Thanks, Nonnaci. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hahah – loved it!
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Thanks, Dahlia. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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🙂
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What a wonderful story, you cheered me up! Thank you, Suzanne!!!
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Thanks, Lore. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it cheered you up. I guess we could all use some cheering up in this world the way things are going. I almost hate to read the paper or watch CNN these days. 😐 — Suzanne
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Hahaha — Peep sees about as well as I do.
What a photo, definitely worth a re-run. Huge hugs my friend.
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Thanks, Teagan. Yes, it was a good photo. I seem to remember Sandra took it in France where she and her husband have a boat on the canals. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. Huge hugs to you also. 😀 — Suzanne
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we all need glasses at some stages of life
http://obliqview.blogspot.in/2016/07/thecremation-prompt-sandra-crook.html
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Thanks, I.B. You’re right. We usually all need glasses as we age. I’m happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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So funny, Is adore this adaptation and crossover fairy tale. Love! I guess this is Bo Peep in mid-life perhaps.
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Thanks, Amy. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. Yes, they never say how old she is, but she could be middle-aged or even older. 😀 — Suzanne
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Aww, very sweet, Suzanne. Very refreshing to read something light and upbeat for a change. The Wizard of Id had a cartoon where a peasant goes to the wizard and says that his cow gives no milk. Later, he brings it in and it’s a BULL! The last frame has the wizard fitting the peasant for glasses saying, “This should clear up your barking horse mystery.” Hahahaha!
Anyway, Boy Blue can go get the cows out of the corn now before he falls asleep on the job … again.
Fun stuff, Suzanne!
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Hilarious, Kent. I really miss the Wizard of Id. We don’t have it in the paper here. Yes, Boy Blue better also get busy and go do his job. I’m happy you enjoyed my story. I had fun writing it . 😀 — Suzanne
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I loved this. It’s refreshingly cute and funny
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Thanks, Mick. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and found it funny. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Very cute. Peep’s lucky to have a friend to keep her on track.
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Thanks, Margaret. Peeps is also lucky to have a friend with better eyesight. 😀 — Suzanne
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