Photo Copyright: Jan Wayne Fields
Here we are for another week. Today we’re on board a virtual ferry on our way to Liberty Island. Our hostess for this excursion is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to write an original story with no more than 100 words, not including the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt is a repeat requested by Russell Gayer and supplied by Jan Wayne Fields. Thanks, Jan, and Russell.
To read the other stories by the group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/07/20/22-july-2016/
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
THE BLOODY BOATΒ by P.S. Joshi
Our family decided to take the tour to Liberty and Ellis Islands. My great grandparents on Dad’s side had come to the U.S. by ship to Ellis Island, then New York City.
The ferry was part of the way out in the ocean. The Statue of Liberty was in the distance but getting closer. Then it happened. We came across the boat.
It was a sailboat, and the deck was covered in blood. The Captain radioed “Shark Attack?”. But how did it happen? There were no sharks or bodies. The owner had ties to the underworld.
Ooh, looks like a rival got to him! Cool murder mystery π
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Thanks, Ali. Those fellows are good at hiding bodies also. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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With the juxtaposition of a symbol of hope and a floating crime scene — the best and the worst of the US, you might say — I think there’s a bit of a message in your story.
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Thanks, Bun. Yes, there’s definitely some of both in the U.S. A large city like New York is a natural breeding ground for crime. The police force does its best, but it’s hard. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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the end left me intrigued
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Thanks, I.B. I’m pleased you liked the story. The crime organizations are experts at hiding bodies. π — Suzanne
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He might have meant other kinds of sharks
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Thanks, John. You notice he put a question mark after the words “Shark Attack?”. Goodness only knows what happened to the body or bodies. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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Interesting that a shark attack doesn’t need a lot of investigation. π
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it was quite surreal encountering a bloody boat during a tour of the statue of liberty. π
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Thanks, Plaridel. In a big city like New York, you never know what will happen. Yes, it would be surreal. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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Creepy (in a good way) take on the prompt.
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Thanks, Alicia. I’m so pleased you liked the story even if it was creepy. π — Suzanne
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Reblogged this on omigacouk.
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Thanks so much, Depatridge, for reblogging my story. I really appreciate. it. π — Suzanne
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Provoking in its intriguing end!
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Thanks, Sabina. I’m so pleased you liked the story, especially it’s ending. π — Suzanne
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Obviously, referring to the ferocious species known as Loan Sharks. I’m sure it was an ugly site to behold. Nice use of the prompt, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Russell. You could be right but don’t go saying that around New York City. It could be dangerous. We better let the police or FBI handle the bloody boat matter. The Captain alerted the Harbor Patrol. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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So sinister… I guess there were some mobster loansharks behind the call.
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Thanks, Bjorn. You never know who to suspect in New York. The Harbor Patrol or FBI will no doubt dig into the matter. It seems someone’s being warned or that evidence wouldn’t have been left behind. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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This is truly out-of box thinking. Great write.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I appreciate the great comment. I’m pleased you liked the story so much. π — Suzanne
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Nice use of normality and the abnormal.
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Thanks, Mike. I’m pleased you liked the story. Normality and the abnormal seem to co-exist on many occasions. π — Suzanne
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A gruesome scene to come upon. That would spoil their day trip. Nice contrast between a happy family outing and the dark side of life.
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Thanks, Margaret. I know it would spoil my day. Thanks for your great comment. I’m pleased you liked the story. π —Suzanne
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I love a good mystery!
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Thanks, Dawn. I love mysteries also. This mystery may be solved by the FBI if indeed it’s solved at all. It’s probably a warning left behind. I’m pleased you liked the story. π — Suzanne
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A gruesome tale, Suzanne. I wouldn’t want to come across that scene. It doesn’t sound like it was sharks – at least not the marine kind. π
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Thanks, Diana. I wouldn’t want to see it either. I think it was definitely a warning. —- Suzanne
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