Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–September 18th, 2016. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt.
To read the other stories written by group members this week, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2016/09/18/sunday-photo-fiction-september-18th-2016/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
THE LOVE NOTE by P.S. Joshi
Marilyn had a crush on Wesley. They talked for hours on their cell phones.
“Well,” said her father, “I can’t forbid it as she works part time and pays the bill. It seems harmless.”
The romance started to become more serious when Marilyn wanted Wesley to write notes to her expressing his love. As they didn’t want to formally mail them and be teased they decided to find a place where each one could leave a note so the other person could find it. It also seemed a romantic idea.
They finally decided on a small Chinese ornament standing on a path in the city’s ornamental garden.
It worked well for some months. Marilyn even put perfume on her notes as Wesley said he wanted to feel she was there with him.
One day Marilyn was late in leaving her note. It was two pages and she considered it a work of art. What they didn’t know was the elderly gardener cleaned the outdoor art once a month.
When he brushed inside the ornament, the note fell out. He picked it up and read.
“Wow,” he said, “I guess I still attract the ladies. How about that.”
Haha brilliant. Poor Wesley though.
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Thanks, Al. Yes, Wesley won’t understand and neither will Marilyn. It made the elderly gardener’s day, though. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Excellent ending 🙂
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Thanks, Tina. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. I had fun writing this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha! Fun story! 🙂
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Thanks, SW. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’m sure the old guy thought the note was for him. Good one Suzanne.
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Thanks, John. Yes, I think he believes that. He probably wonders now who it is. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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A classic tale. I’d like to read how it all plays out.
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Thanks, Iain. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. It’s probably best he doesn’t find out it was a mistake. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha. That’s very funny Susan. The girl neve thought the old gardener would find the note. Probably made his month lol. Great write!
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Thanks, Mandibelle. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. No, Marilyn will wonder what happened and so will Wesley. It no doubt made the gardener’s month. 😀 — Suzanne
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Lol! Love the humorous twist. Wonder how the couple will react when they find out what happened. Nice story Patricia 🙂
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Thanks, Jade. I’m happy you enjoyed the story with its twist and it made you laugh. It will cause problems no doubt, but the gardener enjoyed it. 😀 — Suzanne
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A very fun filled story with a whimsical ending.
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Thanks, Bernadette. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. 😀 — Suzanne
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Aw, bless him 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, it made the old gardener’s day and probably longer. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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A happy ending for the gardener! I’m sure Wesley and Marilyn’s relationship will survive too, so it’s good news for everyone in today’s story. 🙂
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Thanks, Bun. Yes, in time Marilyn and Wesley will get things straightened out, and the gardener will have had his happy moment. It’ll be a happy ending for all. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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