Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–November 6th, 2016. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2016/11/06/sunday-photo-fiction-november-6th-2016/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
THE MOST IMPORTANT By P.S. Joshi
There were two important leaders in the small town of Figgsriver, Indiana.
One was the mayor, Jayson Hicksworth IV, ancestor of the founder. The other was the wealthiest man in town, Portnoy Pimley.
In the town circle, a monument was being built. The problem was it couldn’t be decided whose bust was to be in the center of it. Neither of the important men wanted to share the place of honor.
Jayson thought his bust should be there because of the importance of his family and their contributions to the city.
Portnoy thought it should be his because of his contributions to the many good causes in the city.
Finally, it was decided it should be Jayson’s bust. It was made and installed with great ceremony.
The next day, shockingly, it was mysteriously found knocked off its pedestal and smashed.
The culprit remained unknown.
The two men eventually decided the only thing to do was share the honor. Two busts were installed and all was peaceful from then on.
Amos Furdly reluctantly told his wife something he was ashamed of.
“Emily,” he said, “I got drunk one night and accidentally knocked the first bust off the pedestal.”
“Good,” she said.
Ah, so it wasn’t Portnoy who knocked the first bust off!
I love the names you always choose. “Portnoy Pimley” definitely sounds rich 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I’m happy you enjoyed my story, especially the names. Names usually just come to me. I may have somehow stored up over the years. 😀 — Suzanne
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I liked the story, Suzanne.Thanks.
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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What a bizarre little tale, Suzanne.
I confess I rather like it!
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Thanks, C.E. I guess it was rather bizarre. I wrote it fairly late at night so maybe that was why. I’m happy you enjoyed the story because it was bizarre as you’re experienced with bizarre. That’s what makes your stories so good. Also, maybe it’s like our present presidential election in the U.S. Everyone’s tired and glad it’ll be settled and over. 😀 — Suzanne
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Portnoy Pimley is a great name! Enjoyed this piece very much, great little comic tale, well done.
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Thanks, Iain. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the name. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Nice one. Sometimes things get accomplished in the oddest way. Great story, Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I guess Mrs. Furdly and others in the town got tired of hearing the argument going on about who deserved the bust in the center of town. It’s a bit like our present presidential election. Everyone is tired and glad it’ll be over. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha ha ha. Exactly! I didn’t make the connection, but you are so right. Happy Election Day!
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I agree that the grand names bring the characters to life. Highly entertaining!
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Thanks, Steve. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the names. 😀 — Suzanne
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I think Amos and Emily’s bust should have been there – Amos for his honesty (albeit belated) and Emily for her sensisbility 😀 A very enjoyable piece Suzanne – well crafted 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. You might be right. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Woah! Amos Furdly! I never would have suspected him! 😀
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Thanks, Bun. Yep. Amos is a sneaky one. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I like it. Not someone you would expect it to be. Great story Suzanne.
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Thanks, Al. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. 😀 — Suzanne
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Cute Suzanne. I a funny ending but I think as this Guy’s wife says, it ended up to be a good thing. They stopped quibbling and two busts were in the two center. Well written Suzanne.
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Thanks, Mandi. I thought it was a good way to end it. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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