Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–November 20th, 2016. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2016/11/20/sunday-photo-fiction-november-20th-2016/
Genre: Humor/Fantasy Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
AN UNEXPECTED SIGHTING by P.S. Joshi
Fay and Gloria lie on their backs in the field. It was a lovely day with a cool breeze and outsized puffy clouds floating across the sky.
“I love to make up pictures for the clouds,” said Gloria.
“Oh, so do I,” said Fay.
“There’s an elephant.” Fay pointed to a huge rounded cloud with a trunk-like extension at one end.
“And there’s a large flower.” Gloria pointed to a cloud with petal-like extensions.
“There’s a bear,” said Fay.
“There’s a house,” said Gloria.
“Oh my gosh,” shouted Fay. “There’s a flying saucer.”
“I don’t see a cloud resembling a flying saucer,” said Gloria squinting.
“No, I mean there’s really a flying saucer up there.” Fay pointed directly overhead.
“Oh, no, Flimtock. I think we’ve been spotted by an Earthling,” muttered Octock.
“I told those scientists and engineers on Picton 3 to double check the cloaker before we left. Let me try something not in the manual.”
Flimtock took a metal tool and gave the cloaker a good thump.
Immediately it jerked and began to function again.
“Oh, it’s disappeared and no one will believe us.” Fay was deeply disappointed.
“Good going, Flimtock.” Octock smiled as they spun silently ahead.
Flimlock is obviously an engineer 😄😄😄
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Thanks, Chris. I see you guessed that. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun with that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Cute story, Suzanne. I love your aliens 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. I love writing about them. I’m happy you enjoyed this story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Good for Flimtock! That’s always the best way to fix malfunctioning equipment 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. It’s worked many times. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 —- Suzanne
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Haha That made me laugh. That’s what Flimtock and Octock get for not using a reputable dealer
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Thanks, Al. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. Their planet’s government may be trying to save money. You get what you pay for. 😀 — Suzanne
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Haha so true
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Ha, that didn’t go where I expected it too, a nice surprise twist. 🙂
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Thanks, Iain. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and its twist. You never know what my aliens are going to do. 😀 — Suzanne
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Cute story Suzanne. I guess it doesn’t really matter if you think you saw a space ship, if they can make themselves invisible. There’s no way to prove it. Just people rolling their eyes. Great take!
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Thanks, Mandi. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, people probably won’t believe it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh so aliens do exist! Lovely take Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. Yes, aliens do exist. At least mine do. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’ll have to look out for Flimtock and Octock. I’m not sure who their vehicle dealer was, but I think my parents may once have bought a car from the same place.
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Ha, ha. I think their planet is really trying to save money if they’re buying parts from a dealer on earth. I’m sorry about the car your parents bought. I guess some cars look great but turn out to be lemons for some reason. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family, Bun. I forgot you don’t celebrate it in the U.K. Well, have a good day anyway. 🙂 — Suzanne
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We took someone’s advice about what to do if life gave us lemons. Unfortunately we ended up with oil and small bits of metal in the lemonade.
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