Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
NOTE: I’m returning to flash fiction after a short vacation I granted myself. I especially couldn’t resist Al’s prompt this week. It drew me back.
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–January 15th, 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/01/15/sunday-photo-fiction-january-15th-2017/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
A FEARSOME VOYAGE by P.S. Joshi
The captain, once pirate, Bearded John of the vessel Woe-Begone was a mystery to his men. Most of the crew had never sailed with him before.
He had a favorite goblet he always showed his crew before they started out. It consisted of what seemed to be a small human skull upon which rested the bowl. The stem appeared to be a human spine. It always had a numbing effect on the crew.
“Men,” he thundered, stroking his black beard, “take a good look. This here goblet would be the result of a man treating natives with disrespect. The natives on the Isle of The Shrunken Servent are a mite sensitive. If offended, they first kills the culprit. They next shrinks him from head to toe and sells his bones for such as this.
In fact, they took a special liking to me and taught me the trade. This be my handiwork. I’m a mite sensitive too.”
When the voyage was over the men always scattered hoping never to sail with him again unless shanghaied.
In truth, he’d won the goblet in a game of cards by cheating a traveling drunken ivory merchant. It was the captain’s favorite possession.
It’s amazing what a little bit of fear does for you. His story might not be true but he doesn’t inspire loyalty either.
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Thanks, Sally. That’s right. He kind of overdid it. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Well, his little story keeps the crew in line anyway! Great story 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, he kept the crew in line with fear. No one wanted to be shrunk. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Absolutely perfect. Loved the droll ending.
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Thanks, Bernadette. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. My pirates are real characters. 😀 — Suzanne
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Wonderful job, Suzanne. I particularly appreciate that the story was exactly 200 words. Looks like you’re a puzzle-solver as well as a writer at heart.
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Thanks, Erik. I’m probably good at flash fiction because I’ve written so many stories. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. 😀 — Suzanne
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That’s an amazing goblet! I’d be frightened of it too!
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Thanks, Diana. Yes, it’s indeed a scary-looking goblet. It’s supposed to be part ivory, but who knows. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Good to have you back Suzanne. I liked the reveal at the end of this, the captain had them all fooled!
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Thanks, Iain. It’s so nice of you to welcome me back. I couldn’t pass up a prompt like that. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great to see you back Suzanne. I like the reveal at the end. Terrifying his crew into behaving. I wonder if anyone will ever find out the truth.
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Thanks, Al. It’s so nice of you to welcome me back. I just couldn’t pass up that prompt. I’m happy you enjoyed the story, especially the final part. There’s always a chance someone knew the drunken ivory merchant. 😀 — Suzanne
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Yep. He may even book passage on his ship some time 🙂
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Good one , Suzanne. good way to control the crew.
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, that’s a very good way to control the crew, while he has them on board. 😀 — Suzanne
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:-D. It must be hard getting a new crew each sailing though.
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I have a feeling Captain John was not above shanghaiing if necessary. After all, he was once a pirate. 😀 — Suzanne
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I like this story a lot! The Captain seems like someone who’d be really fun to hang out with once you got to know him and his sense of humor.
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Thanks, Sydney. I’m happy you liked the story so much. Yes, the Captain could be a fun guy as long as he didn’t think you’d make a good member of his crew. Then you might find yourself shanghaied. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hello Suzanne! Good to see you here 🙂 Loved the captain’s imagination – shrinking bones from head to toe! Nice 😀
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Thanks, Dahlia. It’s good to be back. Yes, the captain had a great imagination. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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🙂
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I find it interesting how much power a goblet with connanentations of death in its forging, can be used as such a powerful weapon, to keep the Pirates crew in line. Not a dumb pirate that’s forsure. Great job!
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Thanks, Mandi. He not dumb that’s for sure. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. 😀 — Suzanne
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