Photo Copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Here we are this week gathered around a damaged car at an auto body shop. We’ve gathered again to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneers group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Rochelle herself. Thanks, Rochelle.
To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2017/05/10/12-may-2017/
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
IT WASN’T MY FAULT by P.S. Joshi
It was Brenda’s first day driving on her own in the used car her dad bought for her. She came quietly into the house.
“How’d it go sweetheart?” her mother asked.
When she didn’t answer, her dad leaned forward in his chair.
“Something’s wrong. What’s wrong?”
Immense tears streamed down Brenda’s cheeks.
Her dad rushed outside. “What the hell? This door mirror is crushed.”
Brenda walked outside, feet dragging.
“It wasn’t my fault.”
“What do you mean?”
“I…I parked it and it was like that when I came out to get in.”
“Okay, darlin’, I understand. It happened to me once.”
It is rare to see an undented car on the roads here with the high traffic density and offensive driving. Nice take.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. Since coming to India, I’ve never driven a car or two-wheeler here for that very reason. The traffic in Pune is hideous and getting worse. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh, poor Brenda. I bet most of us have been there. At least her parents are understanding. Great take on the prompt, Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. I’m pleased you liked the story. My son when in high school parked his used car one time near a store and came out to find the whole chrome strip on one side ripped off. There was no note left. —- Suzanne
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Apparently whoever hit her car didn’t bother to leave a note.
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Thanks, James. There is often no note left in cases like that. Someone ripped the chrome strip off my son’s used car while it was in a parking lot. There was no note left. I’m pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That’s recently happened to me – very annoying. Well written Suzanne.
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Thanks, Louise. I agree it is annoying. I’m sorry it happened to you. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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We’ve all been there. Good story.
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Thanks, Iain. It’s a shame it happens so often. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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This has happened to eveyone. Nice job, Suzanne.
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Thanks, John. It’s too bad it happens so often. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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My daughter took out the ordering island at a drive through. Her first crunch. It was her fault.
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That’s what my son told me when I came home from vacation to find a mysterious dent in my car door….
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Thanks, Dale. Ha, ha. Did he look really guilty? You seem to be in some doubt. I’m pleased you liked my story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Ha ha. No, actually. He was smart to tell me about it before I saw it.
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That’s always a good plan. Especially if it IS your fault.
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It has happened to me too with a rental car… how can we ever trust anyone to do the right thing.
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Thanks, Bjorn. There are some we can trust, but it seems they’re a vanishing kind. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
There are so many people out there who are rude enough to bash and run like that. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I know that’s true and it’s a shame. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A fine story, Frustratingly this happened to my car yesterday. Just a small dent.
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Thanks, Mike. I’m glad you liked the story. I’m sorry your car was dented but glad it was just a small dent. 🙂 — Suzanne
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My husband and I saw dangling rearview mirrors all over Ireland ~ all part of the game. Well captured.
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Thanks, Alicia. It sounds like a sport in Ireland. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I did! Couldn’t help it.
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Cute. A father’s love!
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Thanks, Sabina. Yes, dad finally showed his love. It had happened to him also. I’m pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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You are welcome!💐
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A likely story 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. From the comments, I’d say it’s happened to pretty much everyone. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Such an understanding parent… would that ALL parents could be so.
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Thanks, Jelli. Yes, her dad remembered when it happened to him and became understanding. It is too bad all parents aren’t like that. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It can happen to all of us -perhaps has happened to all of us. Sad that it happened on her first day.
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Thanks, Bridget. Yes, she was afraid her dad would be mad. The first day our son drove a used car his dad bought for him someone in a parking lot tore off the side strip of chrome. He felt about it but it wasn’t his fault. My husband understood. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I’m sticking with the aliens & bigfoot explanation. They have broad shoulders. They can take the blame.
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Thanks, Russell. Ha, ha, that’s a great idea. 😀 — Suzanne
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Nicely told Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I fully sympathise with the characters in this s it’s happened to me so often. Supermarket car parks are the worst
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Thanks, Michael. It never happened to me but it did to my son. He lost the chrome strip from the side of his car. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Whatever happened to common courtsey. A very wonderful story.
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Thanks, Neel. I guess courtesy is like sense. If it was common everyone would have some. I’m glad you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Very understanding father. Nice sweet story.
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Thanks, Indira. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Well done. What a joy to have an understanding father.
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Thanks, Connie. Yes, it is a joy. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I did. It reminded me of my Dad.
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My dad was like that too. 🙂 — Suzanne
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