This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–June 18th, 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt taken by him or sent in by one of the participants in the group of writers. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt. This week’s prompt was taken by Al himself. Thanks, Al.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/06/18/sunday-photo-fiction-june-18th-2017/
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
THE EAGLE OF LOS CASA by P.S. Joshi
Many years ago, there was a bad king in the small kingdom of Los Casa. He was an ignorant tyrant put on the throne by poor people who thought he’d better their unfortunate lives.
The real power behind the throne was a wise though evil adviser. He made sure the king kept enough of his promises to his subjects to keep them happy. These promises were damaging for the kingdom but most good subjects felt helpless.
One day a message was written on the castle wall, THE EAGLE COMES.
“Who could have written it?” asked the ineffective local sheriff.
This was the first of many such messages. The king and adviser became frightened. Both were bullies and cowards.
One night all outer clothing was stolen from the castle leaving the king and adviser in their undies. They left the castle in shame and never returned.
Rico Estaban, twelve years old said to the other children, “We’ve done a good night’s work with the assistance of my father the palace cook and uncle the palace groom. Together we’ve formed the Society of the Eagle. What some foolish, gullible adults couldn’t manage we have.
A wiser and kinder ruler was chosen.
Hee 🙂 I have a great image of the nasty king and his evil adviser running off in their undies.
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Thanks, Ali. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hee hee, if only all evil dictators and kings could be dealt with in the same way 🙂
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Thanks, Iain. I’d guess we all wish that. At least those two were disposed of. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. It took me a while to think of a story for that prompt. 😀 — Suzanne
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The Society of the Eagle — what a fun take! i enjoyed the fairy tale story telling quality of it.
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Thanks, Joy. I’m happy you enjoyed the story the way I told it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Excellent story, Suzanne, and the children have the right idea. I think we need a Society of the Eagle to disrobe our current “king.” 😀
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Thanks, Diana. You have the right idea. Canada is looking better and better about now. I only wish. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh no. Ha ha. I couldn’t agree more. What a mess, Suzanne. We actually looked into it, but our kids and grandkids are around here and we haven’t been able to convince them to leave with us. 🙂
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If and when I move back to the U.S., Diana, I’d probably live near my son and his family and no way would he give up his job and house and move. My daughter loves Chicago and would never move. It looks like I’ll have to move back and live in the U.S. ruled by the man who would be king. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Hopefully he’ll be gone by then, Suzanne.
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Excellent tale, loved the voice.
Great piece, Suzanne
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Thanks, C.E. for the great comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
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NICE! Nothing like putting the fear of eagles into the hearts of the evil.
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Thanks, Al. You’re right. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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