Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–July, 9th, 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt taken by him or sent in by one of the participants in the group of writers. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt. This week’s prompt was taken by Al Forbes himself. Thanks, Al.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/sunday-photo-fiction-july-9th-2017/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
THE PROBLEM SHIP by P.S. Joshi
“I tell you, lads, I did see it. It was shaped like a saucer just hoverin’ in the sky. Then it took off like a shot and disappeared.”
“Ah come on James. You sure you weren’t in your cups at the time?” The barkeeper swabbed the bar, an amused look on his face.
“I don’t give a fig if you lot believe me or not. I tell you it was there.” James raised the mug to his lips and drank deeply of the cold ale.
Outside overhead, a spaceship hovered cloaked from sight.
“What do I do, Gitbot if that thing acts up again? Kicking it worked this time but who knows if it will next time. It’s unpredictable. I’ve never seen a worse piece of junk.” Botbit stared at the hidie thingy in disgust.
Ping, ponk, bonk, twang! The ship began to vibrate and tip to one side.
Botbit shouted, “Now what by all the planets is going on?”
Gitbot calmly picked up a round tool and flung it at a vibrating metal box.
“Calm down, Bot. I’ve seen this happen before. Fill out the problem form mentioning all trouble and transmit it to the engineers when we return.”
Wow, very creative and humorous fiction.
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Thanks, HRL for the great comments. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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You are very welcome and enjoy the weekend!
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So interesting that you came up with an alien story from this picture prompt. Fun!
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Thanks, Erik. I can come up with an alien story from almost any kind of prompt. I’m happy you enjoyed it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Wow, Suzanne. This is some great imagination. I enjoyed reading this tremendously. Cheers, Varad
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Thanks, Varad for the great comments. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. I had fun with it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Yes, they really do need support from the Help Desk.
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Thanks, James. I wonder if they really do have an alien version of a Help Desk. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha ha. As always, I love your science fiction stories, Suzanne. We all seem to suffer those “vehicle” problems, even aliens. 😀
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Thanks, Diana. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I enjoy writing these alien stories and the comments on them make me laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha ha ha. Excellent, Suzanne. 😀
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Thanks, John for the great comment. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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I hate it when my hidie thingy malfunctions. It’s always at the most inopportune moment 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I know what you mean. The more complicated something like a hidie thingy is the more trouble you have with it. 😀 — Suzanne
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What if the spaceship crashes right in front of them? What fun! 😀
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Thanks, Dahlia. That would cause quite a stir. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Loved it, Suzanne! Very fun.
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Thanks, Sascha. I’m happy you loved the story and thought it fun. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Sounds like this ship needs some fluid, perhaps they should beam up the contents of the cellar.
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Thanks, Michael. Ha, ha, maybe you’re right and the ship could handle a load of ale. It would probably make the angry spaceman more mellow also. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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This is great Suzanne. It made me laugh
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Thanks, Al. I’m happy you enjoyed it so much and it made you laugh. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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