Photo Copyright: Mike Vore
NOTE: This is late as I’ve had serious server problems. Things seem much better now.
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–July 16th, 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt taken by him or sent in by one of the participants in the group of writers. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt. This weeks prompt was sent in by Mike Vore. Thanks, Mike.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/07/16/sunday-photo-fiction-july-16th-2017/
Genre: Speculative Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
DON’T GO THERE by P.S. Joshi
Brian was exploring Millersburg. His dad now had a job there and had moved the family. He especially wanted to investigate the weather-beaten, deserted house on State Street he’d seen as they drove past.
An elderly man was staggering along the street so Brian decided to question him.
“Hey, Mister is that old house on State haunted?”
The man stared at him and shook his head.
“Sonny, don’t go there. It was a terrible place back in the day. The owner held prayer meetings but I heard they wasn’t praying to the Lord in the Bible. No sir.
“A buddy of mine said he peeked in one time and they was making funny chalk marks on the floor. He never went back. Scared the daylights out of him.
“One night there was screaming like people was gettin’ killed. The sheriff and his men went there and they said it was a terrible mess, blood, and bodies everywhere. Don’t go there, son.”
The old man shuffled off mumbling to himself.
Old drunk, Brian thought. He was now more excited than ever.
The house was up ahead. Running to it he slowly ascended the rickety, sagging steps.
No one saw him again.
Where is Scooby Doo when you need him? I’m sure he and the gang would’ve discovered it was just Old Man Johnson the whole time!
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Thanks, Erik. Ha, ha, I never would have thought of that. I’m glad you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Well, you can’t say he wasn’t warned 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, he was certainly warned but was foolish and didn’t listen. It’s like those college students in the horror screamer movies who wander into the woods alone when killings are taking place. These people are like the red- shirted crew members in the Star Trek movies. They exist to be victims. I’m glad you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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A chilling tale, Suzanne. He should have listened to the advice!
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Thanks, Diana. Yes, he refused to listen and suffered the consequences. Of course, he could have been taken into space by aliens. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Perhaps he was teleported, guess we may never know, unless …
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Thanks, Michael. Yes, that’s a possibility. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Enjoyed it, Suzanne.Thank you.
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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🙂
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Nicely written piece, Suzanne, cleverly built.
But can I say that it might have been even more potent without the last sentence?
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Thanks, C.E. That’s possible but I’m not a big fan of cliffhanger endings unless another chapter is forthcoming. I’m glad you liked the story, the way it was written. 🙂 — Suzanne
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When will youngsters listen to oldies? Ah well neither did I – once upon a time 😉 Nice writing Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. Children always think they know better. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That’s a great story. Can’t say he wasn’t warned. I wonder where he disappeared to. Or When.
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Thanks, Al. I guess we won’t know unless he turns up again. I’m glad you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
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