Photo Copyright: Ted Strutz
Here we are this week gathered in front of a work of art in a neighborhood park. We’ve gathered to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneers group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Ted Strutz. Thanks, Ted.
To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2017/12/27/22-december-2017/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
A BARGAIN by P.S. Joshi
The day had arrived when Jake Goodrich, famed local art critic, was to choose the show winner. Jake stopped in front of the piece labeled “Wheels” and smiled.
“Without a doubt, this is the masterpiece,” he said in a voice that rose above the mumbling of the large crowd. He put the sign 1st Prize in front of it and stepped back.
That night under a streetlight payment exchanged hands.
“Here’s the amount asked for, Jake,” said Brad Mathews. “Thanks to you I not only have the museum’s top award money, my garage is thoroughly cleared out.”
bribing an art critic? surely not!
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Thanks, Neil. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Well, it’s just a story. I don’t personally know of any critics who have been bribed but sometimes I wonder. 😀 — Suzanne
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A clean garage is well worth it. Very neat.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, he won in two ways. Now he can get his car in the garage. 😀 — Suzanne
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This made me smile. That’s one way to clear out your garage!
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Thanks, Clare. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you smile. Yes, a clean garage is a great thing. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha! You made me laugh out loud with the bit about the garage, Suzanne. Delightful. Have a thriving Thursday!
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Thanks, Teagan. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I enjoyed writing it. I hope you have a thriving Thursday also. I had trouble getting to your last post from my email. You might want to check it out. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’m sorry about the post. Heaven knows why, but WordPress double posted it. Since I had it set to post at midnight, I new there would be some inconveniences… People were leaving likes on both posts. But I decided the best thing was to delete one of them. I’m sorry you had to deal with that, but I’m happy you made the effort. Hugs.
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Wonderfully told, Suzanne. Really enjoyed your story.🙂🙂
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Thanks, Moon. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. 😀 — Suzanne
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Serious underhanded stuff going on here. Beautifully constructed.
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Thanks, Linda. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and thought it was well constructed. Yes, there was serious dishonesty involved. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Ha ha ha. Good one, Suzanne.
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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All the better, Suzanne. 😀
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Dear Suzanne
Now that’s what I call creativity coupled with ingenuity. 😉 Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, there was both ingenuity and creativity involved, more of the first than the second I’m afraid. 😀 — Suzanne
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Everyone’s a winner – apart from the other artists who lost out!
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Thanks, Iain. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, unfortunately, all the other artists were losers. —- Suzanne
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Art is such an emotive business. Judging must be tough. Losing even tougher.
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Thanks, Kelvin. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, we put a lot of ourselves into our art form and it’s tough to be criticized and/or lose. —- Suzanne
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Good twisty tale here.
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Thanks, Jelli. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. You’re right it is twisty. 😀 — Suzanne
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I, too, burst out laughing when the cleaning of the garage was mentioned! That was a fun and original take!
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Thanks, Dale. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much and it made you laugh. Maybe I thought of that idea because I’m sitting here with a spare bedroom full of stuff I need to get rid of. 😀 — Suzanne
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Having just finished with my mother-in-law’s place – which was no laughing matter – this was way more fun
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Corruption at the art show?😲
Sneaky way to win, but some art does look like the creators tossed all their unusable stuff in a pile.
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Thanks, Christine. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. You’re right. Some art does look like it either came from a yard sale or was set on the curb for anyone who wants it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha ha ha ha ha. That’s what I call killing two birds with one stone.
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Thanks, Anurag. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. That is indeed killing two birds with one stone. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ooh, the naughty person. I have a rather full garage too, I wonder if it will work for me? 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, he was naughty and I don’t know if it would work for you. I wouldn’t recommend it. 😀 — Suzanne
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I would have to bribe so many authors and artists, just for the garage alone, then there is my study, but perhaps I might get a best seller out of it. Great story Suzanne
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Thanks, Michael. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I know what you mean. There’s a junk man with a cart who comes around here and I have sold some stuff to him. However, I didn’t even get close to getting rich. I know he didn’t think of it as art. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great Suzanne and has given me ideas for my garage clutter. 🙂
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Thanks, Michael. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Good luck with the garage clutter. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’m sure Jake’s not the first critic to have been bought. Cleaning out the garage was probably worth more than the monetary prize.
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Thanks, Russell. I”m happy you enjoyed the story. You may be right on both points. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha… lots of fun… wonder if I should ever trust an art critic… on the other hand it might be a good deal for the buyer anyway…
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Thanks, Bjorn. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. He was a local critic so perhaps needed the money. I don’t actually know any crooked ones. A future buyer may profit and surprise the artist. Who knows? 😀 — Suzanne
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who knows? a hundred years from now, it may end up being an enduring piece of art after all. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. You may be right. Who knows what might happen. 😀 — Suzanne
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Delightful, Susan. I love the idea of a clean garage (well, really our basement needs a bit of cleaning!) Thanks for the smile.
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Thanks, Alicia. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I have a spare bedroom that needs emptying out more than at present. 🙂 — Suzanne
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You made me smile at the end there.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you smile. I’m sitting here with a spare bedroom that needs clearing out. Happy New Year 2018! 😀 — Suzanne
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Two birds with one stone.
Bravo!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, two birds with one stone went down. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hahah – loved this one Suzanne! Very well done – now if only I was artistic enough 😉
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Thanks, Dahlia. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Alex. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I was writing humor. I don’t think there are really many dishonest art critics. I made up the story. The picture was sent in by Ted Strutz one of the writers in the Friday Fictioneer group. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Cheryl. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. If you’re wondering where the pictures for the stories came from, they are sent in by other writers in the blog my stories are connected with. The link to that blog is in the presentation to my story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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