Photo Copyright: Victor and Sarah Potter
Here we are this week gathered near a spider’s web, a large one. We’ve gathered to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneers group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and be inspired by the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Victor and Sarah Potter. Thanks, Victor and Sarah.
To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
Genre: Speculative Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
BEWARE THE WEB by P.S. Joshi
It was broiling outside and frosty in the lounge. George enjoyed this escape from everyday reality, this chance to meet people.
As he stepped up to the bar an exotic fragrance entranced his senses. A beautiful woman now stood close to his left side. Turning to him she produced a Virginia Slims and whispered, “Have you a light?”
He felt like he was floating.
Putting a warm hand on his she repeated, “Do you have a light?”
Coming back to reality he answered, “Sure.” Pulling a Zippo from his pocket he lit her cigarette.
He’d been ensnared.
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You created a lovely – and solid – scene. Nice
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Thanks, PM. I’m glad you liked the story so much. That’s a great comment. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Caught in her web just like that – men can be so predictable!
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Thanks, Iain. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, he was surely caught like a fly in a web. 😀 — Suzanne
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Nice one, Suzanne. That last line really grabbed me. Yep, he’s caught in the web, alright. 😀
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Thanks, Diana. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Yep, she’s got him. Just a fly in her web. 😀 — Suzanne
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Yay George! Or maybe he’s in trouble now. I can’t decide 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Yes, she’s got him but she’s up to no good as they say so he’s in trouble. 😦 — Suzanne
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Caught, yes, but maybe happy to be so?
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Thanks, Liz. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. He might be happy but he needs to realize it was too easy and so is suspect. 😦 — Suzanne
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Nice opening line. I don’t think he’ll mind being ensnared by a beautiful woman – even though her breath must smell of cigarettes!
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Exactly. A friend of mine once said, “Kissing someone who smokes is like licking the bottom of an ashtray.” – Not that I ever licked one. 🙂
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Thanks, Susan. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. He won’t mind but she has more on her agenda than romance. She’s like a spider with a fly. 😦 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Russell. I’m glad you liked the story. You’re right. George was an easy mark. It was too easy and so should be suspect. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It sounds like George was an easy mark.
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Uh! Oh! George seems to be an easy victim, or is he?
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Thanks, Subroto. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. You were right the first time. George is an easy victim. She has more than romance in mind. 😦 — Suzanne
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Nicely crafted. Nicotine and spider-silk are tough to break out of.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. You’re right. She’s spun a web and caught him and not for romance. 😦 — Suzanne
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She had him a soon as he got his Zippo out! Excellent Suzanne
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Thanks, Keith. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. You’re right. He was a goner when he provided the light. 😀 — Suzanne
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And so it goes… and once upon a time, it was sexy to smoke… so he never stood a chance!
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Thanks, Dale. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I guess this was kind of a film noir like the forties and fifties movies The woman often had a cigarette and asked for a light. I could see a young Lauren Bacall standing there. 😀 — Suzanne
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Absolutely!
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Dear Suzanne,
I remember when smoking was sexy, too. Ugh. Glad I never thought so. George’s goose is cooked as he’s made an ash of himself. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ha, ha. I love that comment, Rochelle. I never thought of smoking as sexy either. I had serious sinus problems and the smoke from other people bothered my throat. Probably more people smoked in those days because the movies made it look glamorous. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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but the question is, “will he rise to the occasion?” 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m glad you liked the story. As to what George will do we’ll have to wait and see. She’s got him though. That’s for sure. 🙂 — Suzanne
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The Black Widow strikes again? Or maybe, just maybe, this is the beginning of a beautiful relationship 🙂
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Thanks, Anurag. I’m glad you liked the story. I’m afraid it was far too easy to be a romance without consequences. She’s more like a woman in a James Bond movie. She’s after more than just poor George. He just doesn’t realize it yet. 😀 — Suzanne
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Now I am wondering how he will ever manage to be free again.
Great writing, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Moon. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. That’s a lovely comment. He might get free somehow but not without effort. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Cigarettes and perfumes can be powerful, but in general they turn me off. But I enjoyed your story
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Thanks, Michael. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Cigarettes turn me off and I like some perfumes while I’m allergic to others. I have a serious sinus problem probably due to allergies. I wrote this story like the old film noir and pulp fiction pieces. I’ve been reading a book by the well-known author James Scott Bell entitled HOW TO WRITE PULP FICTION and that probably influenced me 🙂 — Suzanne
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Allergies can be really disabling. I have seen that first hand in my family. This story did remind me of old films.
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My, my, my, Suzanne I’m now so very glad I quit smoking and carrying a lighter. Well done.
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😀 — Suzanne
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Hahah – that’s all it took! But then again perhaps the moment she turns away the spell will break. Well written Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. The spell may break but he’s pretty hooked unless someone comes to his aid. 😀 — Suzanne
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I would be safe… I’m totally against smoking…
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Thanks, Bjorn. I’m glad you liked the story. It probably took place in the 40’s or 50’s when it seemed glamorous. I’m so glad neither of my children smokes. My husband didn’t and neither do I. —- Suzanne
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But I hope it’s not a deadly snare!
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Thanks, Linda. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. She’s got some plan in mind that doesn’t end with romance. She’s probably working for someone who needs information. —- Suzanne
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The fool! The utter fool! But what a way to go. From now on I will carry a Zippo. And practice floating.
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Thanks, Patrick. I’m happy you enjoyed the story so much. I loved the comment. Take it easy on the floating. 😀 — Suzanne
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She tangled her web right around him and he was too dazed to see it.
I like the way it had a 40’s feel when smoking and long gloves ro the elbow were fashionable.
Loved it, Suzanne. It was sharp and to the point.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks, Isadora. I’m happy you enjoyed the story with its 40’s feel. That’s a great comment. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Those last three words pulled it all together!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m glad you enjoyed the story, especially the way I ended it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Creepy! So true how sometimes it’s that little interaction that makes the rest inevitable.
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Thanks, Anne. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and thought it creepy. She kind of crept up on him like a spider. 🙂 — Suzanne
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