Photo Copyright: Claire Fuller
Here we are once again. This week we’re in a library basement where there are document lockers. This is the Friday Fictioneers group and we’re here with our guide and hostess, the gracious and talented Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us is to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt provided for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Claire Fuller. Thanks, Claire.
To read the other stories from group members, just click on the little blue frog in the blue box after clicking on the link. The link for the other stories this week is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/08/26/28-august-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 98 Words
THE GREAT EDWARDO by P.S. Joshi
Deep underground are lockers. Not ordinary lockers, they’re reinforced steel with special combination locks.
This is the repository for The Great Edwardo’s magic tricks. World famous, he was terrified another magician would steal his secrets.
Over the years he’d inherited, or bought, tricks such as sawing a woman in thirds, disappearing from one box onstage to another, now having different-colored hair and his clothes on backwards, and pulling two-headed blue rabbits out of a hat.
Then he suddenly died ten years ago and no one’s gotten into the lockers since. People wondered if he planned it that way.
Now that’s what you call a possessive nature! 🙂 Nice one Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. Maybe he thought he could take everything with him or come back for it. I’m happy you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Sawing a woman into thirds — c’mon, who can’t do that! Sawing one in half is tough. Cute use of the prompt.
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Thanks, Perry. I’m happy you liked the story. I had fun with it. Someone may use blasting powder on those lockers some day. There’s probably a curse on them like the ancient Egyptions used. I personally have never seen a woman sawed in thirds, but I heard he did it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Cagey magician Eduardo. Good job of pulling as story out of a hat. Imaginative.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. Yes, Edwardo was quite a character. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I had fun with that one. 😀 — Suzanne
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Great story, Suzanne. I wonder what’s in those lockers after all. I like these stories that make me want to turn the page and find out 😀
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Thanks, Diana. I guess only The Great Edwardo will ever know for sure unless someone can find a way to open them, maybe another magician. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I’m sure someone will find a way to magic them open 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. You’re probably right. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, no! No apprentice to carry on his tricks. I bet it will take a magician to open that vault. Creative take, Suzanne. I really enjoyed this.
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Thanks, Amy. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Edwardo was so possessive he never had an apprentice. Maybe be thought he was so great he’d live forever. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Great story Suzanne. My thought at the end of it, “Of course he did! Otherwise he wouldn’t be called “the Great Edwardo.” 🙂
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Thanks, Joy. I think you’re right. There’s always someone greater though. Someone will probably be able to get the lockers open one day. 🙂 — Suzanne
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LOL! Yes there are always someone greater! I agree, the lockers will get opened one day.
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They just need to keep waiting. Ten years is nothing to a great magician. Love this story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Marg. I’m so pleased you liked the story. I think you’re right. Someone will eventually come along and open the lockers. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That place is sure full of tricks – Eduardo’s and all the participants.
Truly innovative.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, the lockers were just full of tricks. I hope someone can get in and use them again. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Maybe the vault is empty and Eduardo was having everyone on 🙂 Very imaginative take on the prompt, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Joy. I’m so glad you liked the story. You never know with Edwardo what will happen next. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’m sure he planned it that ways.. love the two-headed blue rabbits.. that takes a lot of skill.
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Thanks, Bjorn. You’re probably right. It would be just like Edwardo to plan that. I’m glad you liked the rabbits. That would take skill. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’ve seen women saw men into small pieces, but that was just a typical divorce settlement. I can only assume Edwardo was a bachelor.
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Thanks, Russell. Yes, Edwardo was a bachelor. He wouldn’t want to share with anyone enough to even marry. 😀 — Suzanne
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