Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
Here we are again. Today we’re visiting a farm. We’ve gathered in this place to discuss our original stories for the week as the Friday Fictioneers group. This is actually a repeat of this prompt. I had a good story for it last February so decided to use it again. Our hostess for this gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words not including the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Al Forbes. He writes for this group and for his own group, Sunday Photo Fiction. Thanks, Al.
To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2017/01/25/27-january-2017/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
FAITHFUL OLD CLOPPER by P.S. Joshi
Old Clopper, or Clop for short, had been owned by the Rigleys for years. He’d grown up with their children.
His main job was pulling the family buggy, but he also helped old Blinker the plow horse.
Sometimes the children rode him bareback for fun. He had a good life.
“Yes sir,” Pa often emphasized, “I just don’t trust these newfangled automobiles. I bought a tractor but I needed that when Blinker died.”
Mr. Johnson at the next farm bought a Model T Ford, then Mr. Pitt. The next year so did Pa. Old Clop was finally retired to the pasture.
I hope the grandkids still play on old Clop. I would!
You’re really making me want to try this Friday game, though my blog isn’t really conducive to sharing my results. Still, I’ve really been enjoying each of your takes on these (no one-trick Blinker, you!) and it gets my gears going.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Jump aboard anytime, Erik! 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Erik. What a nice comment. I’m happy you enjoyed this story and others. Feel free to join in anytime. My dad used to tell of riding his grandparent’s old horse. He said sometimes it would just head for the barn. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Poor old Clop. A well earned rest at least, but you can’t hold back the march of progress it seems. Sweet story Suzanne.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks, Iain. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. That’s right, progress continues with or without a person. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Suzanne,
Such a sweet story. I’m glad you shared it a second time. Thank you for apprising me of my little blooper. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Rochelle. You’re welcome about the story. I didn’t mind doing it again and it was new for a number of people so it was okay. I’m happy you enjoyed it. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLike
I do hope old Clop has a field of sweet grass and a warm den for the winter.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Mike. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. Old Clop was fine. He was a big favorite and well looked after. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like old Clopper had a good life and being out in the pasture isn’t so bad. Lovely story, Suzanne.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Diana. Yes, Old Clop enjoyed retirement. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Folksy and fun, Suzanne. Has a great line of narrative.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Kent. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and the way I wrote it. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Had to happen sooner or later. Fun story
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, John. Yes, progress forges ahead. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
I did. 🙂
LikeLike
I’m glad he wasn’t dispatched to the knackers’ yard. Nice story, Suzanne.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Sandra. Yes, Old Clop was allowed to retire. He was a big old pet mostly so no knacker’s yard for him.I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
A delightful story. Makes me want to go out and find old Clop and keep him company for awhile.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks, Alicia. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and I made it seem real. You never know. There might be an old Clop out there somewhere. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLike
I am glad Clop is getting some rest. Cute story 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Dahlia. Yes, Clop finally got to retire and live an easy life. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s quite sad (unless Clop is glad of the rest!). Hopefully the kids still ride Old Clop and keep him company 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Ali. Old Clop is enjoying retirement and the children of the family still visit him so he has a good life. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope Old Clop enjoyed his well-earned retirement. 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Bun. Yes, Old Clop thoroughly enjoyed his retirement. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nothing lasts forever, it’s bittersweet.
LikeLike
Thanks, Bridget.You’re right, progress moves on regardless. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very succinct passage of history, narrated beautifully, couched in poetry!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Sabina. What a great comment. I’m glad you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Time catches up with us all, hope old Clop lives out a long retirement
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Mick. You’re right. We can’t beat time that’s for sure. Yes, I’m sure Old Clop will have a long retirment. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLike
I enjoyed it just as well the second time around, Suzanne. A good story can carry an over again read.
Isadora 😎
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Isadora. I’m happy you enjoyed reading the story again. Such a lovely comment. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sweetly told, Suzanne. I would not have enjoyed a literary twist that had something bad happen after such a lovely story. Nice work. Mega hugs
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Teagan. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I couldn’t have been unkind to Old Clopper. Mega hugs to you also. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Feel sorry for Clop, but eventually we all start to use new technology, when everyone else does. When it becomes necessary. Great write Suzanne.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Mandi. You’re right. We all have to face change, especially with new technology. Old Clop will be okay. I’m sure he’ll enjoy his retirement. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Sounds like Clopper had a life any horse would envy.
LikeLike
What an era of change we’ve seen in the last 100 years. My dad still had a couple of work horses when I was small, but sold them around 1960. Horses have a personality–and an attitude–something you won’t find in machines.
LikeLike