Photo Copyright: Al Forbes
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–May 28th, 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt donated by himself or one of the other writers in the group. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt. This week’s prompt was donated by Al Forbes himself. Thanks, Al.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/05/28/sunday-photo-fiction-may-28th-2017/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 200 Words
LARRY’S BIG BREAK by P.S. Joshi
There’d been a long stretch between roles for Larry, a film extra hoping to be a character actor. It was tough going. His agent sent him out often but someone else always got the role.
“Lar,” his friends told him, “your big break will come. You’ve only been in LA for two years. You’ve got to have patience.”
Finally, his agent called.
“Larry, they’re auditioning at Universal Studios for a new sci-fi TV series. Get over there ASAP. It’s an open audition.”
When he finally got to the studio his heart fell. The room was full of people. He’d been to these auditions before.
He asked one of the hopefuls waiting, “What’s the part?”
“Alien,” the guy said. “One line.”
“What’s the line or haven’t you been told?”
“You won’t believe me.”
“Try me.”
“It’s ‘Eek, wok, wok.’ They’ll probably have a voice over. Aliens use English electronic translators these days. The ‘Eek’ stuff’s probably just to get us to move our mouths.”
Finally, Larry had his turn. He gave the line all he had.
“EEK, WOK, WOK.”
“Okay,” the man told him. “You’ve got the part.”
Except for a week into rehearsals, they cut the part.
Aw darn. Back to square one Lar. 😀
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Thanks, John. Yep. Let’s hope Larry gets another break soon. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh no fair! I was ready to cheer for Larry, even if it wasn’t exactly a speaking part. Poor guy.
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Thanks, Eric. Yes, that’s show business. Let’s hope Larry get’s a good speaking part soon. I’m happy you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Poor guy. And he eek’d his wok so well 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, he gave that line his best try. That’s show biz. Let’s hope something good comes along soon. I’m happy you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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What a tragic little tale of dashed hopes. Nicely done, Suzanne
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Thanks, C.E. Yes, it was tragic but typically show biz. Let’s hope another part will come along soon. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That’s the movie business for you.🙂
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Thanks, Mike. Yes, that’s typical show biz. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzane
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Oh darn. And it sounds like he gave that one line his all, too! Well, better luck next time, Larry!
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Thanks, Joy. Yes is was disappointing, and he gave a great reading too. I’m glad you liked the story. Larry says he’ll keep trying. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Ah! that was a tad disappointing. I mean the poor guy waited and then gave his best shot and was shot out of the movie. Nicely written, though, Susie.
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Thanks, Neel. Yes, it was a big disappointment. That’s show biz, though. I’m glad you liked the story, the way I wrote it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Great story, Suzanne. Poor Larry! I imagine that happens now and then, but hopefully not on your first big break. He certainly looks the part! Lol.
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Thanks, Diana. Yes, he really tried hard. And he had a lot of makeup applied as he doesn’t really look like that. That’s show business. Hopefully, another part will come along soon. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh darn it – felt really sorry for him 😦 Excellent take on the prompt Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks, Dahlia. I know. It’s easy to feel sorry for him, isn’t it? If his agent keeps sending him out hopefully he’ll get another break. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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LOL Poor guy. Hopefully he will get another one soon that deosn’t end up on the cutting room floor
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Thanks, Al. I hope he has another break soon also. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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