Photo Copyright: Susan Eames
Here we are again and this week we’re gathered by an island beach under palm trees. We’ve come together to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneer’s group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and be inspired by the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Susan Eames. Thanks, Susan. To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link below, then on the smiling blue frog. Next, follow the given directions. The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 98 Words
Mistaken Identity by P.S. Joshi
A British friend and I walked to the beach from our swank hotel in Tahiti. Our companies had sent us on business. The waves lapped the beach in rhythm to a gentle breeze.
Overhead was a tanned man in surfer shorts perched in a palm tree, his cell phone to his ear.
Reg frowned. “Lazy native bugger,” he mumbled.
“Boy, bring us some drinks,” he shouted.
The man swung down, grinned, and extended his hand. “Bill Martin here,” he said in a clipped U.K. accent.
“Sorry, I missed what you said. I was on an important business call.”
A nice rendition of wrong assumptions
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Thanks, Neil. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. The business call saved the day. You never know. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Glad he didn’t hear 🙂
Important calls need better network & isolation that a palm tree top can offer!
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Thanks, Anita. Yes, it’s good he didn’t hear. I’ve never been to Tahiti so I don’t know what’s available there. Maybe he wasn’t expecting the call at that time. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Dear Susan,
You made me laugh. Mistaken identity indeed. We all know what happens when we assume. 😉 Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. I love that saying. It really fits the situation. Shalom to you also. 😀 — Suzanne
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One can never be too sure who they are addressing.
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Thanks, Tannille. A customer came into the place I was working. I was at the front desk and he started to complain about people from India. I didn’t dare say anything to a customer. He didn’t know I was married to an Indian. We truly never do know who we’re addressing. —- Suzanne
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the man on the man must have heard about his mistaken identity. this made me laugh. and never judge people.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/05/the-cellphone.html
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Thanks, Kalpana. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. No, it’s not good to judge people. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Never judge a book by it’s cover – or a person by their appearance!
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Thanks, Iain. You’re very right. You can make some big blunders. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A good lesson in why one shouldn’t make assumptions. Good one, Patricia.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks, Susan. You’re right, it is wrong to make assumptions and can be embarrassing as in my story. I’m glad you liked the story and thanks for the picture that made it possible. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Ha hahah. Excellent, Suzanne.
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Thanks, John. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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😊
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Your story ridicules the casual racism of many westerners. I like that; it deserves ridicule and more.
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Thanks, Penny. That’s very true. It’s hard to read about all the racism these days, especially in the U.S. It’s getting worse instead of letting up. —- Suzanne
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“Looks can be deceiving” comes to mind. Maybe their judgmental selves need to head back up the beach to their company-paid posh hotel.
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Thanks, Jade. That man may be the manager of the hotel for all they know. Wouldn’t that be something? 🙂 — Suzanne
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You picked a good title. Yes, you just never know!
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I bet you he did hear and just decided to let them eat crow!
Never judge a book by its cover. You’d think some people would have that figured out by now
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Thanks, Dale. That’s a possibility. Some people don’t want to figure it out. It makes them feel big to try and look down on others. In reality, it’s making them look smaller. Others are just plain dumb. —- Suzanne
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This is so true,
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i think some kind of apology is called for in this case. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. You’re right, but some people will try to get away with not apologizing. Reg will probably just hope the man didn’t hear him. Some people never learn. —- Suzanne
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Thankfully it wasn’t his boss. Just shows where assumptions can lead you. Good one, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. Yes, Reg was lucky. It might be the hotel manager though. Reg better hope the man actually didn’t hear. —- Suzanne
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Appearances can be deceptive!
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Thanks, Ali. Yes, appearances can be very deceptive. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Jumping to conclusions – not wise!
My go at Friday Fictioneers!
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Thanks, Keith. You’re right. Jumping to conclusions is never wise. —- Suzanne
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Love it … Shouldn’t judge by the exterior, you are inevitably wrong! =)
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Thanks, Brenda. I’m happy you liked the story so much. These are really bad times to judge, especially if you travel. There are all kinds of people in the world and we all have to try and get along. —- Suzanne
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OH, I love this. The arrogance of the tourist (“BOY!”) shows up clearly against the courtesy of the man perched on the tree.
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Thanks, Linda. I’m happy you like the story so much. I’m glad I got the arrogance across. He was a businessman but seems to have taken a vacation from common decency. The other man showed the correct attitude. of not only a good businessman but a decent person —- Suzanne
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Attitude! I thought the man was half a century behind.
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Thanks, Abhijit. Indeed he was half a century or even more behind. Even back then good manners and common decency were always in style. —- Suzanne
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There were many good people before too. But there were also people who would demand with impinity, brown skin to take order.
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Yes, there are always those types of people. Some people resist change. We just have to wait for progress to force them. Chances are there won’t be a greater change until some of the older people retire and new, more enlightened people take over. It seems a struggle to get some to join us in the 21st Century. They cling to the old ways. —- Suzanne
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This story made a laugh. Susan, this was indeed a very nice story of wrongful assumptions.
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Thanks, Neel. I’m happy you enjoyed the story and it made you laugh. 😀 — Suzanne
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The ugly face of racism. I’d love to know what Reg’s next line would be. Would he be chastened – or not?
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Thanks, Margaret. I’m picturing Reg as the type who hopes the man really didn’t hear and tries to smooth it over. Some people aren’t into being chastened. He has to have a big ego. Let’s hope he learns to behave better before he loses his job over his rude behavior. —- Suzanne
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Ooh, slap! Totally unexpected and good build-up.
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Thanks, KZ. I’m glad you liked the story and you enjoyed the ending twist. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice twist!
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m glad you enjoyed the story with its ending twist. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Isn’t that just like us humans to jump to conclusions?
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Thanks, Russell. It often happens and regret comes later. —- Suzanne
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Ugh, what a creep, calling him boy and expecting service. Horrible guy. I hope he gets fired.
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Thanks, Gabriele. I know, that behavior is terrible. If it gets back to his company I doubt they’ll be happy about it. —- Suzanne
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That’s the way we treat the locals. A shame.
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Thanks, Patrick. Let’s hope not many visitors treat locals that way these days. That would truly be terrible. —- Suzanne
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Finally getting to read stories today; the weekend flew by! Such a funny turn at the end. Serves the bigoted jerk right! Nice job, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Dawn. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes. He truly got what he deserved. It would be great if all bigoted jerks got what they deserved. —- Suzanne
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Yes indeed!
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