Copyright–Roger Bultot
Here we are once again to show our creativity by writing original stories for the Friday Fictioneers’ weekly challenge. This challenge is to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to include a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt supplied for the week. The gracious and talented author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, is the hostess for the challenge. The prompt this week was supplied by Roger Bultot. Thanks Roger.
For those interested in publishing their short stories, I found a great blog post with helpful information and links. The major link is as follows:
http://writerunboxed.com/2014/08/10/how-to-get-your-short-stories-published-in-lit-mags/
The link to Friday Fictioneers and all the other stories is as follows:
http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/08/22-august-2014/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
PARKIN’ SPACE By P.S. Joshi
Matt sauntered out of the big truck stop hotel on Route 98. He spotted a crowd standing in the parking lot around his 18-wheeler.
Someone was laughing, hard. When he pushed his way through, there was his brother John, his shoulders shaking and head thrown back. Then he noticed the truck. Vines and other growth were wound all around the front grill, trailing under the bumper, and out onto the pavement for about five feet.
“Well Matt,” John said, tears streaming down his face, “I guess that’s the last damn time you’ll argue with a landscaper about a parkin’ space.
Exactly! Revenge is always a fearful thing…
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Thanks Hamish. It certainly is. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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Ha ha ha. That certainly gave him food for thought 😉 Well done!
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Simple and elegant. 🙂
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Nice. 🙂 I guess landscapers are more powerful than I thought. At least he had a sense of style in his revenge.
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Thanks David. Yes, landscapers have a style all their own, even in revenge. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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Ahhaha, such a concise to the point story. 🙂 One of my favorites this week!
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Thanks PR. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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Truck driver vs. landscaper! Who would’ve thought the latter would win…except when it comes to…a battle of the wits! Charming tale…
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Thanks Hugmamma. Yes, it seems wits won over physical strength this time. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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hopefully, matt got the message loud and clear. 🙂
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Thanks Plaridel. Yes, I think the message got across. 🙂 —Susan
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Funny! Lucky trucker, usually that sort of thing costs a fortune 🙂
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Dear Susan,
Guess it’s true when they way he who laughs last laughs best. Cute story.
shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m sure he’d never fight with a landscaper now. Nice story 🙂
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Thanks Uma. No, I don’t believe he will. I glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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That’s fun. Hope Matt and John make it up. Brothers, eh?
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Thanks Patrick. Yes, they’re brothers. John just has a better sense of humor and wasn’t the one who argued with the landscaper. There could also be a bit of sibling rivalry mixed in. I’m sure Matt won’t stay mad, and I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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lol very funny. and the lesson is be careful who you tangle with. 🙂
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Susan,
This provided a good chuckle for me this week. Nice take on the prompt!
Cheers!
Marie Gail
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Ha.. there are ways of revenge that goes can be quite captivating.. 🙂
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I am always amazed how one photo can prompt so many different stories. Another week, another great story.
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An amusing tale, Susan. Very well written. I felt like I was there laughing with John at a red-faced Matt.
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Life is like that. Nice one of the brothers had a sense of humour. Nice story!
Lily
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Susan, funny story! Don’t mess with the landscaper. Well written story. Good one!
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such a cute take on the photo and it is very easy to relate on siblings having some fun when a humorous life lesson appears.
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An amusing story, Susan. I think Matt is a lucky man for getting his truck done so quickly. Otherwise just getting an appointment with a landscaper can be so hard these days.
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You paint a lovely image. I’m not sure Matt will think so, but the landscaper’s revenge was a gentle one.
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That was a little scary.
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Dear Susan, You are BRILLIANT! I love it and am still laughing. Very good revenge – his brother is right! Thanks for the humor! Nan 🙂
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Susan, this one is very well written and a hilarious punch line! I love it!
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LOL!!! I love it.
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I do like the fact that you managed to derive an entirely logical explanation from such a thoroughly illogical picture 🙂
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Thanks for making me laugh. I needed that. Watch out for those landscapers. Well done. Lucy
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Thanks Victoria. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 —Susan
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Hi Susan, I really had a laught now. It’s so interesting how our minds work. You see humour and I see sadness looking at this truck. Can’t wait for tomorrow’s prompt!
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Great little tale
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