Copyright–Bjorn Rudberg
Here we are once again, gathered this week in a virtual ruined castle with our gracious and talented hostess and guide, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. It’s December, but there’s rumored to be a ghost who returns here only in the Christmas season, and we hope to catch a glimpse of him. We’re wearing our winter coats to keep warm. We’re also here to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneers group, and the challenge is for each of us to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Bjorn Rudberg. Thanks again Bjorn. We’ve just spotted the ghost, and Sir Roderick and I both wish all of you a Happy Holiday Season!
The link for all the other stories is as follows:
http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/12/24/26-december-2014/
Genre: Speculative Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
SIR RODERICK RETURNS By P.S. Joshi
It was Christmas Day in the year 1614. All the knights at the castle had feasted after the long pre-Christmas fast.
Sir Roderick felt chest pains. “Probably overate,” he thought as he drifted off to sleep.
He awoke refreshed, but met with a strange sight. Half the roof was gone, and he was sitting alone on the banquet hall floor. All furnishings were missing.
He arose and walked into the courtyard. It was overgrown with weeds. He walked to the steps down the wall. They were also covered with growth.
He would eventually learn his spirit had returned in 2014.
Dear Susan,
Sir Roderick had quite an awakening, didn’t he? I’m sure he won’t recognize the place.
In the last line do you mean “his” spirit rather than “this?”
Nicely written, left me wanting to know more.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. I caught that typo in the last line on my last reading just after I connected with your blog, but my computer was slow in doing the edit. It’s now been fixed. Thanks. I’m very pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice nap.
Terrific tale.
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Thanks Elephant. Yes, Sir Roderick is a sound sleeper. Not many of us wake up as ghosts though. I’m very glad you liked the story as I enjoyed writing it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Entertaining little tale with bags of atmosphere, Susan. Well done.
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Thanks Sandra. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Happy Holidays to you and yours! 🙂 — Sizanne
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Sir Roderick has many surprises in store. Excellent.
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Thanks Yarnspinnerr. Yes, Sir Roderick’s got a “lot” of surprises coming. I’m so glad you liked the story. Happy Holidays to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I think that this could be an excellent beginning of nice revelation of how weird we are today… Please let Sir Roderick continue his walk into this world…. lots of things to discover.. greetings and holiday wishes.
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Thanks Bjorn for that great picture. It’s going to be responsible for a lot of good stories. It has so much atmosphere. I may just bring back Sir Roderick now and again to continue his discoveries. He’s a good character.
Greetings and holiday wishis to you and yours as well!
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A nap like that would put Rip Van Winkle to shame. It must have been all the Tryptophan in the turkey. We’ll see if he turns out to be a friendly ghost or a chain-rattler. An amusing tale, Susan. Merry Christmas to you.
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Thanks Russell. Goodness only knows what condition food was in those days when people ate it. Sanitation wasn’t all that great. I read that they often tossed bones on the floor for the dogs. They probably ate a lot of food when they had it.. This gang of knights had been fasting.so they were especially hungry. He probably just ate too much and his heart gave out. If knights didn’t die on the battlefield, with the shorter life expectancy in those olden days they still probably didn’t live all that long conpared with today. Old in those days was different than old these days. With that lifestyle, they probably looked older than they were in years. I’ll bring him back every now and again to see how he’s doing. He’s a man ( now ghost) of action so won’t stay in one place for long. I’m very pleased you liked the story. Merry Christmas to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Merry Christmas to you and Sir Roderick. Ghost stories are quite appropriate both for the photo prompt this week and for this time of year. I’ll raise a glass to the memory of your ill-fated knight. Good story.
All my best,
Marie Gail
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Thanks Marie Gail. I and Sir Roderick wish you and yours a Merry Chrismas also. Sir Roderick would love to raise a glass with you, but alas he’s no longer able to do so. This is hard on a knight who raised a good many in his day. I’m very happy you liked the story. I had a lot of fun with this one. Happy Holidays to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I enjoyed reading this ghost story. 😀 That was some heartburn!
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Thanks Priceless. Yes, Sir Roderick misdiagnosed his problem His heart gave out from the strain of overeating. I’m very glad you enjoyed reading the story as I enjoyed writing it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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LOL! Yes he certainly did! 😀
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Nice one. Alas, poor Sir Roderick! I knew him not. All he needs is an internet connection and google to bring him up to speed on what’s happened in the last 700 years. But no dial-up, that’s only in hell.
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Thanks Subroto. You’re probably right. He’s going to quite surprised to say the least. I’m very pleased you liked the story. I had fun writing this one. Happy Holidays! 🙂 — Suzanne
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I’m guessing it wasn’t just indigestion, then 🙂
I wonder what his spirit will make of 2014?
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Thanks Ali. No, he probably passed on because his heart couldn’t take the overeating. That was probably the last straw. Life was hard in those days. I guess I’ll have to check in on him now and again to see what’s happening with him. Happy Holidays! 🙂 — Suzanne
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Waking up more than 400 yrs later must have been quite scary to be honest ;).
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Thanks Aseem. Yes, waking up after that long as a ghost will be a big adjustment for Sir Roderick. It probably was scary. I’ll check in on him from time to time to see how he’s doing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Quite a surprise for Sir Roderick. Cute story and a likeable character. I hope he’s a happy ghost.
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Thanks Marg. I’m so glad you liked Sir Roderick and the story. I’ll check in on him from time to time to see how he’s doing. He was a jolly knight so will probably adjust in time although it was a huge surprise. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Suzanne,
that’s even worse than Rip van Winkle. 🙂 I like the twist. What a way to wake up though; dead and 400 years later. 🙂
-David
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Thanks David. Yes, he’s got a lot of surprises in store after 400 years. I’m so glad I got the effect I wanted and you liked the story. I enjoyed writing it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Susanne, at least Sir Roderick had a hearty feast before his very long sleep. I can’t imagine his castle still stands or what has become of his life. Nice twist at the end and an enjoyable read.
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Thanks Amy. He’ll probably go check on his home castle. His castle is likely in ruins if it’s still there. Relatives probably took it over. I’ll have to check on him once in a while to see how he’s doing. I’m very glad you liked the story as I had fun writing it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Dear Susan,
Time travel of a sort. I believe there ware many things still unexplained or waiting to be discovered. Welcome to the long now, Sir Roderick.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks Doug. I’ll have to check in on him once in a while to see how he’s doing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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This was interesting, Susan 🙂 And spooky! However, I wouldn’t mind meeting the spirit of a knight. Sounds romantic. Happy Holidays!
Ellespeth
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Thanks Ellespeth. I’m so glad you liked the story. I probably wouldn’t mind meeting a ghost like Sir Reginald. He’s a gentleman and was a jolly knight. Happy Holidays to you also! 🙂 — Suzanne
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Four hundred years – even princesses get less sleep! Great ghost story for Christmas.
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Thanks Liz. Yes, Sir Roderick is a sound sleeper alive of deceased. 🙂 I’m so glad you liked the story. Happy Holidays. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Your introductions are always so much fun then followed by wonderful tales. I very much like the way you “deteriorated” the castle. Happy New Year.
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Thanks Alicia. I’m so glad you enjoy the introductions as well as the stories. Those intros are fun for me too. I had in mind some of the old ruined castles they show on the internet. Happy New Year to you also. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Sir Roderick woke up after 400 years, a Rip Van Winkle slumber.
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Thanks Kalpana. Yes, Sir Roderick had a nice long sleep. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Now that’s a hard pill to swallow. Poor Sir Rodrick
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Thanks Joseph. Yes, Sir Roderick has some difficult adjusting to do. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Indeed!
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Great story. I’m always amazed that people can tell so much with so few words. Excellent work.
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Thanks Mgill. I’m so pleased you liked the story, and thanks for the encouragement. Now that I’m used to it, writing flash fiction is easier for me than writing longer stories. I’ll have to work on that though as I want to begin writing regular short stories. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I have at times felt like Sir Roderick this last year…asleep at the wheel and waking up to ‘Holy cow, what happened? Enjoyed your story!
Lily
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Thanks Lily, We’ve probably all thought that at times. 🙂 I’m so glad you liked the story. I enjoyed writing it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Wow, now that would be a shock! What a fantastic take on the picture. Your story left me wondering what would happen next to Sir Roderick. Maybe you will write some more about him…
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Thanks Kirsten. I’m very glad you liked the story. I had fun writing that one. I’ll bring Sir Roderick back once in a while so we can check on him to see how he’s doing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Poor Sir Roderick! What a jolt that would be! A fun tale this week, Suzanne.
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