Photo Copyright: Jean L. Hays
Here we are again this week. Today we’re sitting in virtual folding chairs across from a virtual tourist attraction where three cars are buried slanting skyward. We’re here to once more discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneer’s group. Our hostess is the gracious and talented author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us is to write a story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt provided for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Jean L. Hays. Thanks, Jean.
To read the group’s other stories, just click on the little blue frog in the blue box after clicking on the link. The link for the other stories this week is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/o7/01/3-july-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
LOIS’ FIRST CAR by P.S. Joshi
Lois’ first car was bought by her dad using the small amount of money left her by her grandfather. When he made out the Will, he’d been divorced by her grandmother and said, “Lois is probably the only one who’ll outlive Martha.”
Time proved him almost right. Grandma Martha died at the age of 97.
Lois kept a diary. She wrote:
“Dad and I went to the downtown used car lot. Dad favored an old, black, four-door sedan.
“I looked inside and said, ‘Dad, I can see the ground through a hole in the floor.'”
“Good enough,” he said.
I had one of those cars. Not for long though. Nicely done Suzanne. š
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Wonderful take on this one.
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Holes are good for scooting along when you run out of petrol.
Clever take.
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Ha ha. I owned a car with a hole in the floor as a teenager. It was only the size of a quarter. It sounds like Lois has a bigger problem. Fun story.
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I know a boy with a car like that. He’s five and it’s a pedal car!
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Bad purchase, dad. Well crafted story.
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I like your take on the prompt. Obviously it brought up good and bad memories for our FF club. Kudos.
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Maybe Dad thought he could fix it š Who knows? š I doubt Lois relived her childhood though š
Here’s me Friday Fictioneers fiction
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There’s always something a little bit wrong with your first ever car. It’s like your parents think you’re going to trash it or something š
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Dear Suzanne,
My first car was a 1971 VW Beetle. It also had a hole in the floor. It was a royal blue lemon, but it was my first and I have some good memories of it nonetheless.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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My first boyfriend had a car like that and I had to keep my feet out of the way especially when it rained. Great story.
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Maybe the father had a hole on his first car too š
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This really feels nostalgic and sweet, Suzanne. A lovely story this week.
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That’s probably the emergency exit, need to trust Dad a bit more. š
Nicely done as always Suzanne.
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Ha! I hope the car works! This sounds a bit like my entry this week, Suzanne. We’re on the same wavelength. Nicely written.
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Thankfully I never had to have someone else buy my first car.. I waited till it could be done with my own money.
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Interesting story connecting the family tree to the car with a hole. Nicely done.
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Cute story!!
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Isn’t this what first cars are all about? It brings back memories of my old car, too. Lovely story.
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