Photo Copyright: Luther Siler
Here we are another week. This time we’re gathered at a virtual puppet show. Our hostess for this gathering is the gracious and talented artist and author, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We are the Friday Fictioneers, and the challenge this week, and every week, is for each of us to write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt provided for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Luther Siler. Thanks, Luther.
To read the other stories from group members, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box. The link for the other stories this week is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/12/09/11-december-2015/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
PERFORMER’S LAMENT By P.S. Joshi
Depression is setting in, and I’m worn thin. I’d like to think, just once, I’m controlling my own destiny.
People say I was made for this life, that it fits me like a hand in a glove. What do they know?
Every day is the same. There are no real choices. At day’s end, I’m cast aside like an old rag.
I’m forced to perform by those controlling me. They get paid, but not me. I don’t see any money. What’s with that?
What would happen, I wonder, if I went on strike? But are they worried? Not a bit.
I never thought about a puppets life. Now I will. An intriguing take on the prompt.
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Thanks, Alicia. I don’t think most of us worry about what a puppet thinks or feels. Perhaps we should. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Being he’s a puppet, I don’t think they have much to worry about! Funny story.
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Thanks, Perry. I also doubt they have much to worry about, except maybe wearing thin and getting holes. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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I was reading a bit deeper into your story and thinking it was about a person who feels like they have no control over their life. 🙂
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Thanks, Deborah. Probably the reason you thought of the story that way was that I gave the inanimate puppet human qualitites. I did it of course to make it funny. It could just as well be applied to a human being, and that wouldn’t be funny in the least. Your understanding of the story was interesting. — Suzanne
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I thought I smelled allegory here. Well done. 🙂
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Thanks, Archon. Yep, it could be an allegory. I’m so pleased you liked it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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The world-weariness of your character comes through strongly. Well done Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. I guess a puppet can become weary also. They really don’t have a life of their own. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Like Deborah, I took your story to have a deeper meaning. I rather felt that way the last three years or so of my employment. Cake decorator and puppet had a lot in common. 😉 At any rate you served up a well written story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I guess my story could apply equally to a puppet or a real person. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Puppet take. 🙂
Great write.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Why do I feel like that puppet sometimes? Nice one which works for both puppets and small time human puppetteers.
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Thanks, Ansumani. I suppose many of us feel like that puppet at times. I’m so glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I bet there are many who feel like this, puppet or human!
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Thanks, Ali. You’re probably right. Life can be hard at times. —- Suzanne
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it’s telling it as it is… if only a puppet can talk.
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Thanks, Plaridel. Yes, we possibly should consider what’s going on in those little heads. 😀 — Suzanne
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I like the twist, Suzanne. The story is so serious without the picture. Well done!
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Thanks, Diana. I know and was surprised so many readers took it seriously as I wasn’t thinking seriously when I wrote it. When I thought about it after reading some of the comments, though, I could understand those comments.
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I saw the serious side also. So often we feel as though we are just puppets in life’s scenario that perhaps it rang too true for many. Good story though.
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Thanks, Irene. I can see where some readers saw things in it that they identified with. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Interesting POV. Poor puppets. Nicely written Patricia.
Tracey
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Thanks, Tracey. I thought I’d use a more humorous POV. It could also be the POV of a person although I didn’t think of it that way when I wrote it, I can understand how some readers saw it that way. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I think we are all there with strings attached more or less… to me it worked as metaphor very well. Very well done.
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Thanks, Bjorn. You’re right, it could apply to a person as well. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I agree with Bjorn – this could so easily apply to real people. Have you read ‘Love of Seven Dolls’?
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Thanks, Liz. You’re right as it could easily apply to people. I haven’t read “Love of Seven Dolls” but it sounds interesting. I’ll make a note of it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Sad lament. I love the sentence People say I was made for this life, that it fits me like a hand in a glove. So fitting, you might say.
Lily
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Thanks, Lily. You’re right, it is fitting. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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I can relate to the weariness and helplessness of your character. I’m sure many can relate to this on a deep level. Very well done, Suzanne! On another note, I have some Indian friends whose families were affected by the floods. Are you okay? I hope you are well.
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Thanks, Amy. I’m so glad you liked the story. How nice of you to think of us. We live at the top of a gradual hill here in Pune. There is flooding sometimes at lower levels, especially since rivers run through Pune. Also, the drains get stopped up. It can really be a mess. Cities here tend to build over the natural drainage channels for the water and that causes a problem also. Thanks for your concern. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Hmmm … a puppet on strike?
Me thinks it will still be a human/master imposed strike … poor fellow.
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Thanks, CAH. It very well could be. 😦 — Suzanne
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Whether this is about the bird, or has a deeper meaning, you really nailed this, Suzanne… very powerful and real. It touches a chord in many, I suspect. Wonderful story!
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Thanks, Dawn. What a great complement. I really appreciate it. I’m so pleased you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Such a poignant story, Suzanne, and it’s so full of sadness and full of hidden meaning!
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Thanks, Vijaya. I’m so glad you liked the story and the way I wrote it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I did, and you’re welcome!
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Ah, the lot of the working puppet! They should unionise!
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Thanks, Patrick. My character might just put that idea forth to other puppets.. 😀 — Suzanne
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I too took the story to have a deeper meaning. About not being in control of your life. Woks well as a puppet’s lament too 🙂
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Thanks, Subroto. Yes, the story could work either way. I’m so glad you liked it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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