Photo Copyright: Jan W. Fields
Here we all are again for another week. Today we’re gathered in a virtual room with a virtual harpsichord on display. Our hostess for this gathering is the gracious and talented author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We’re the Friday Fictioneers group. Our challenge this week and every week is to each write an original story with no more than 100 words. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and follow the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was supplied by Jan W. Fields. Thanks, Jan.
To read the other stories by the group, just click on the link given below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link for this week’s stories is as follows:
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/01/20/22-january-2016/
Genre: Humor Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
THE MIDNIGHT MELODY By P.S. Joshi
My friend Marge and I had often heard about the haunted Fritzen mansion. We decided to pay a fee and spend the night in residence.
It was said the ghost of Mitzie Ann Fritzen, the unmarried daughter of millionaire Horace Fritzen, had haunted for years since her tragic death of a heart attack as she played her favorite plaintive piece on the harpsichord.
It was a chilly, full-moon night.
We arranged our sleeping bags and waited with trepidation.
At midnight. her spirit appeared and began to play.
We both agreed on one point. Mitzie Ann could have used more lessons.
Dear Suzanne,
The last line made me laugh out loud. I didn’t see that coming after the spooky buildup. Good job!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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I echo Rochelle here. I burst out laughing at the end there. Cracker, Suzanne. 🙂
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story that much. I guess you can tell I enjoyed writing this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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The ending was hilarious. Brave girls 🙂
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Thanks, Ansumani. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha!!! That ending made for a laugh out loud moment. Fun!
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Thanks, Alicia. I’m really pleased you enjoyed the story so much. I enjoyed writing this one. 😀 — Suzanne
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the ending totally caught me by surprise. well done. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m so pleased the twist at the end surprised you and you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hi,
I know Patricia Ruthsusan.
Sounds scary– a spirit playing the piano.
Congratulations on being Danny Ray’s featured blogger today. I was his featured blogger too! Maybe you can check out my site.
Janice
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Thanks, Janice. I’ll be sure to check out your site and Danny Ray’s also. Thanks for visiting my blog. 😀 — Suzanne
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I will look forward to your visit.
Janice
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🙂 — Suzanne
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Very funny Suzanne.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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Thanks, David. I’m so happy you enjoyed my story and thought it funny. I love getting that praise from a published author who writes humor. I enjoyed writing it. xxx Huge Hugs xxx to you also. 😀 — Suzanne
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Hee, great last line, very funny! Here was I expecting them to run screaming from the haunted house and instead they critique the ghost’s musical ability 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. I’m so pleased you thought the story funny, especially the last line twist. 😀 — Suzanne
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Ha.. Never day before you know your music… But maybe she cannot come to rest until she can play properly… it had to be an ordeal with such a ghost.
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Thanks, Bjorn. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Yes, even though she’s been at it for many years, she can’t seem to get it right so keeps trying. 😀 — Suzanne
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You are so funny. You really left me LOL.:)
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Thanks, Susan. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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🙂 Fun post.
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Thanks, Yarnspinnerr. I’m so glad you liked the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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This is such a hoot. The girls have spirit. I love it.
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Thanks, Gah. I’m so pleased you loved the story. Yes, those girls don’t scare easily. 😀 — Suzanne
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Suzanne, that was a great unexpected twist at the end. Nice subversion of the normal haunted house trope. I loved it.
-David
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Thanks, David. I’m so happy you loved the story, especially the ending twist. 😀 — Suzanne
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I enjoyed his, Suzanne, especially the ghost’s name and the surprise ending.
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Thanks, Margaret. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story, especially the name and ending twist. I enjoyed writing it. 😀 — Suzanne
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Really really funny! You abruptly deflated something that promised to be scary and made it funny. Hell, who told you to be funnier than me?
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Thanks, Perry. What a “great” compliment. I may have been extra funny this time, but I think you have me beat on the “amount” of funny material. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh, Suzanne!!! I loved this. Such a quiet and paced introduction, one would expect chills at the end. Alas, you made laugh, thank you for that.
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Thanks, Lore. I’m happy you loved the story, especially the end that made you laugh. I enjoyed writing that story. 😀 — Suzanne
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