Photo Copyright: A Mixed Bag
This story was written for Sunday Photo Fiction–April 30th 2017. Each week the host, Al Forbes, provides a picture prompt donated by one of the participants in the group of writers. The challenge for each member of the group is to write an original story or poem with no more than 200 words, not including the title and inspired by the prompt. This week’s prompt was from “A Mixed Bag”.
To read the other stories written by group members, just click on the link below, then on the little blue frog in the blue box.
The link to the other stories this week is as follows:
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/04/30/sunday-photo-fiction-april-30th-2017/
Genre: Humor Fantasy
Word Count: 200 Words
Take Us to Your Leader by P.S. Joshi
On a warm, sunny day in June a tiny flying saucer landed outside the Parkinson house on Elm Street in Brinkman, Ohio. A shimmering beam shot out from it and two aliens from the planet X14 were transported into the living room.
Mr. Parkinson was at work in the local brewery. Mrs. Parkinson was teaching at Brinkman High School. Their two children, Dick and Doris, were at Brinkman Elementary School.
The only occupant of the home was a hefty horsefly resting on the computer keyboard. Tictosh tried to link his mind with the fly’s but had no luck. Pintosh next tried to network with the same result. They decided to express themselves in the Earth language for that location. They spoke together.
“Take us to your leader.”
They waited but nothing happened.
“Pintosh, this Earth person is either hard of hearing or extremely stupid. I wonder if they’re all like this.”
The fly, bored, zoomed to the kitchen.
“Well, Tictosh, he can fly without a vehicle which is more than we can do.”
On returning to X14, they gave their report:
There is no intelligent life on earth.
Forget about any attempts to rush contact.
Lucky for the Parkinson family that they were out!
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Thanks, Steve. Yes, it was extremely lucky what with both the horsefly and the aliens. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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That would explain why we haven’t had any alien contact yet. The flies are scaring th em away. Good story Suzanne.
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Thanks, Al. Yes, now we know. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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The aliens were about as intelligent as the fly! Ha ha. So fun to read, Suzanne. I always like your humor and science fiction.
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Thanks, Diana. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed being back with my little aliens. 😀 — Suzanne
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Huh, we could have had advanced science, spaceflight and cool alien art and that silly fly screwed it all up. Fun story 🙂
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Thanks, Ali. Yep, that fly messed up our chances to catch up with Star Trek. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Oh lord!! 😀 I think we are all seriously doomed if et’s that are meant to one day visit and share their advanced knowledge and teachings with us are more stupid than we are!! Heeeeelp! 😉 Fab story! 🙂
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Thanks, Victoria. Yes, I’m afraid they’re not the most brilliant aliens in space. I hope we can do better when it comes to first contact. Where are the Vulcans and Dr Spock when you need them? I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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Exactly! 😉
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Nice story, great imagination. At the moment aliens might get more sense out of a horsefly than the leaders of the world!
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Thanks, Iain. You may be right. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 😀 — Suzanne
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To me it was a splendid minimalism on the dangers of hubris and ignorance (or hasty decision-making aka prejudice). Thanks for sharing it freely.
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Thanks, A.M. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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