Photo Copyright: Ted Strutz
Here we are again and this week we’re gathered near a river to watch a seaplane take off. We’ve come together to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneer’s group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and be inspired by the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by Ted Strutz. Thanks, Ted. To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link below, then on the smiling frog. Next, follow the given directions.
Genre: Human Interest Fiction
Word Count: 99 Words
When All Else Fails, Call Dad by P.S. Joshi
Frank sat on the bed, crying. He felt rotten.
He’d trusted Hank with his money, and now it was gone. The guy said his friend was hiring seaplane pilots and there was training. The fee was $200 to get into the program.
Here he was in Alaska, broke, hungry, and the rent was due, He’d had such high hopes of becoming independent.
There was just enough credit on his iPhone to call his parents and ask for money.
The call connected, and his dad answered.
“Hi son, what do you need, money to come home? Don’t worry. I’ll wire some.”
It is always good to have supportive parents who will help you when you make mistakes. Good one.
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Thanks, Colline. You’re right. I was fortunate to have supportive parents and tried to be one. So did my husband. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
I love that he has a supportive father. Just what he needed at that moment. Uplifting story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m glad you liked the story. It’ wonderful to have supportive parents especially when you have trouble. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I’ve been on both ends of this call!
Good story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, C.E. Many of us have been on both sides. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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An uplifting story, Suzanne. Thank you.
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Thanks, John. I’m glad you liked the story and found it uplifting. 🙂 — Suzanne
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That was lovely, Suzanne. So happy the father wasn’t angry and willing to help. As, I like to think, most parents would be…
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Thanks, Dale. I’m glad you liked the story. I also like to think most parents are supportive. Sadly some aren’t. Mine were. and my husband and I were. My mother could never understand why some weren’t. She thought it was terrible. —- Suzanne
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What a kind, generous father – I hope Frank’s able to repay him some day.
Susan A Eames at
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Thanks, Susan. Yes, he was both kind and generous. I have a feeling Frank will try to repay that kindness. I know from experience how great it is to hear a parent say, “Do you want to come home?” 🙂 — Suzanne
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The sort of Dad I hope to be! 🙂
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Thanks, Iain. I have a feeling you’ll be a great dad. I’m happy you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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What a great Dad, reminds me of my father and mother sending me funds. A memory to treasure
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Thanks, Michael. I’m glad you liked the story. You do have a memory to treasure. My dad let me live at home when I was in college and never asked for a penny. He even helped a bit with college fees one year even though he was retired. I dearly loved him. When I first started working before college, he helped me get my first job. 🙂 — Suzanne
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There is a call I never wanted to make. At least Dad was supportive.
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Thanks, Jo. I’m glad you liked the story. It is hard to ask for money. I’m glad your dad was supportive. Sometimes that’s all we need. —- Suzanne
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That is a “Top Dad”. I had a foster dad like that. Drove all the way to Indianapolis one night just to rescue me from a drunk and abusive boyfriend. Drove all night, put me to bed on his couch, then put on his uniform to go to work… I still fail to comprehend, but love him all the more for it.
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Thanks, Bear. Your foster dad sounds like a “Top Dad”. I can understand why you love him so much. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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The Royal Bank of Mum and Dad, of which I am a manager! I completely understand!!!
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Thanks, Shrawley. That’s a great way to put it. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Well either he doesn’t make many mistakes or he has some very unconditionally generous (and wealthy) parents. In any case, I’m so happy they said they would help him 🙂
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Thanks, Jade. I think his father understands he’s trying to be independent and just made a mistake. Perhaps the dad went through something similar when he was younger. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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🙂 You are very welcome, Suzanne.
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Sometimes the only thing standing in the way of us solving problems is our own pride. Good the son summoned the courage to make the call. Of course if this becomes a habit, Daddy might feel less generous.
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Thanks, Andrea. I’m glad you liked the story. This is the young man’s first attempt to be independent and I hope he’s learned from it. Let’s hope it doesn’t become a habit. It sounds like he was scared enough to have learned a lesson. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Awwww, reminded me of my Dad. We were always hard-up for money while I was growing up, but he never once asked me the reason whenever I asked him for some money.
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Thanks, Anurag. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Your dad really sounds like a great person. My parents didn’t have a lot of money but by the time I was born, they were comfortable. My parents were older and had been through the Depression so had learned to be careful with money. Dad did what he could and was protective of me. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Somehow I wasn’t expecting such a warm ending. Nicely done, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’m glad you like the story even though the ending wasn’t what you expected. If it was at the beginning of a longer story I would have had to make my lead character suffer more, but I thought I’d give this flash piece a happy ending. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice dad! Do you think he will use the money to go home?
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Thanks, Danny. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, I think he’s scared enough to go straight home. I know I would in the same circumstances. Of course, I would have been too cautious to get into that kind of trouble. At least I like to think I would have been. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A heartwarming conclusion to a sorry story. Excellent.
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Thanks, Keith. I’m happy you liked the story so much. It’s what my dad would have done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It’s good to have parents who will help rather than blame.
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Thanks, Ali. I’m glad you liked the story. It’s great to have parents like that. 🙂 — Suzanne
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well, that’s exactly what my dad in the philippines told me over the phone when i couldn’t find a job in new york. 🙂
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Thanks, Plaridel. I’m glad you liked the story. Your dad sounds like a great person. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Felt bad for Frank but glad he had his family to turn to. Moving story, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Brenda. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and thought it was moving. When I was having difficulties one time it was so good to hear my mother ask, “Do you want to come home?” 🙂 — Suzanne
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That’s very sweet and important to remember. =)
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Gotta feel bad for poor Frank, who got scammed out of his money. Sounds like he has a good family to turn to though. A very touching story.
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Thanks, Linda. I’m glad you liked the story and found it touching. I wrote it and felt sorry for him also. It is great to have a loving family to help you. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Nice dad, always ready to help.
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Thanks, Abhijit. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, Frank did have a nice dad. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I hope Frank has learned to be less trusting with his money. Dad is a great guy.
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Thanks, James. Hopefully, he’s learned an important lesson. Yes, his dad is a good father. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Amazing how our parents can always sense what’s needed. Fun story.
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Thanks, Alicia. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, they seem to know. They probably remember when they needed help. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Failed dreams are always hard. At least the parents are supportive!
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Thanks, Tannille. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, we all have problems in life. It’s great if our parents are supportive. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Love how supportive his parents are. Nice read.
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Thanks, Lisa. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, his parents are great. 🙂 — Suzanne
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He’s lucky to have someone to turn to, even though I am sure it doesn’t feel like that right now.
Good read.
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Thanks, Dawn. Yes, he’s fortunate to have nice parents. I’m sure he knows that even though he’s embarrassed to have to need money. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank goodness his father answered his last-hope plea! Really nice story – all of yours are always good.
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Thanks, Nan for the great compliment. I’m glad you enjoy my stories. I enjoy yours also. Yes, his dad saved the day for him. 🙂 — Suzanne
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No questions asked. Just loved and supported. Wow! We need more dads like Frank’s 🙂
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Thanks, Invictus. I’m glad you liked the story. He was a great dad. It would be grand to have more of them. 🙂 — Suzanne
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