Photo Copyright: C.E. Ayr
Here we are again and this week we’re gathered near a desk in a living room. We’ve come together to discuss our original stories for the week. This is the Friday Fictioneer’s group. Our hostess for the gathering is the talented and gracious author and artist, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge for each of us this week and every week is to write a story with no more than 100 words, not counting the title. It’s supposed to have a beginning, middle, end, and be inspired by the picture prompt for the week. This week’s prompt was provided by C.E. Ayr. Thanks, C.E. To read the other stories by group members, just click on the link below, then on the smiling frog. Next, follow the given directions.
Genre: Human Interest Fiction
Word Count: 100 Words
Left Behind by P.S. Joshi
My mother left us. She’d always been there to help, and I guess we thought she always would be. A sudden massive heart attack during a nap took her.
There were no hospital or nursing home bills left behind. She never wanted to cause trouble. I wonder if she prayed to go that way. It was something she’d do.
A heartbreaking memory was left behind. I cried when I found it.
On the desk was an open mystery book, with her glasses resting on top. I took a picture, made copies for other family members, and framed mine.
Bye, Mom.
Dear Suzanne,
A very poignant story. The best way to go…reading. Nicely written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I’m glad you liked the story. My dad died that way the day he came home after a month-long stay in the hospital. It was 1980 and they didn’t check for blood clots. It was hard on us but it could have been even worse. As a retired fireman, he had a great medical plan that covered the total hospital stay. —- Suzanne
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It must be heartbreaking not to get the chance to say goodbye, or even to contemplate doing so. A very poignant take on the photo, Suzanne.
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Thanks, Sandra. It was hard. I found him when I took a suitcase into the bedroom. I was planning to stay at my parent’s home with my children and my mother until he got his strength back. My husband had brought him from the hospital and given him lunch. —- Suzanne
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Lovely, Suzanne, just lovely
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Thanks, Neil. I’m glad you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Good story!
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Thanks, Bear. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A lovely idea, a perfect memory to leave behind.
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Thanks, Iain. I’m glad you liked the story. It would make a perfect memory. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Lovely, yet sad. Words fail me.
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Thanks, Michael. I deeply appreciate your words and the sincere feelings behind them. My father died in a similar way. I found him and it was difficult. —- Suzanne
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Great story and very touching. 🙂
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Thanks, David. I’m glad you liked the story and found it touching. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh, your story is great! Not being able to say good-bye is truly sorrowful and something that lingers for years. Nicely done!
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Thanks, Nan. I’m glad you liked the story so much. It is hard not being there when someone passes. It happened to me with my husband also. He was due to come home. It was physically difficult for me to go to the hospital when he went so his caregiver went and was there with him. It was the third day and he was improving. His cousin, a doctor, was also there. I got a call from the doctor treating him. There are forty-three steps to our flat in the building and no elevator. I use a walker. I got a ride with another relative and saw his body at the hospital. Hopefully, I’ll be able to move to a building with an elevator soon. —- Suzanne
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A poignant piece made all the more so by your personal experiences.
My story is a but click away!
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Thanks, Keith. I’m glad you liked the story so much. 🙂 — Suzanne
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this story touched me deeply. my mother just passed away aug. 29 of cardiac arrest.
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Plaridel, please let me offer my condolences on your mother’s passing.
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thank you very much.
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You are very welcome.
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Thanks, Plaridel. My deepest condolences and sincere prayers on your recent loss of your mother. May she Rest in Peace. I can understand how my story must have touched you deeply. —- Suzanne
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thank you for your sympathy. deeply appreciate it.
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So sad, very touching, But she passed away in her own home surrounded by her family and books.
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Thanks, Ali. That’s what consoled me about my dad’s passing. He got to come home, a place he deeply loved. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Those last memories are so important.
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Thanks, James. That’s very true. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Lovingly told, Suzanne. A very nice way to go.
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Thanks, Dale. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, it is a gentle way to go. 🙂 — Suzanne
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So poignant. My dad went blind in his last years, and it was one of his great sadnesses that he could no longer read his beloved books. Also, I wasn’t able to say goodbye before he died. So this beautiful story was hard to read, but so well done. Thank you.
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I understand your pain. My mother was almost totally blind and had Alzheimer’s when she died at the age of 93 in 1994. I couldn’t take off from work to be with her as she gradually weakened when she stopped eating. She finally caught the flu from another visitor at the nursing home and died peacefully. We had given directions she be kept comfortable but extreme measures were not to be taken. Thank you for sharing. ❤ —- Suzanne
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So sad. A reminder to treasure each moment.
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Touching and tender. Nicely done 🙂
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Thanks, Linda. I’m glad you liked the story and the tenderous in it. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A touching story. I think only a lucky few leave so peacefully. The memory she left behind in her book and glasses is poignant.
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Thanks, Abhijit. I’m glad you liked the story. Yes, many people say they’d like to go that way but most don’t. I’m glad you liked the ending with what she left behind. 🙂 — Suzanne
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And you mother will never know who the murderer was (in the book)
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That’s right. Thanks, Bjorn. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A beautiful way to go, lost in a good book
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Thanks, Shrawley. You’re right. It is a beautiful and peaceful way to go. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Heartbreaking
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Thanks, Laurie. I appreciate your comment. —- Suzanne
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Bitter sweet story. What a way to go, no fuss. The book may be a message. Great story 😀.
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Thanks, Tannille. I’m glad you liked the story. 🙂 — Suzanne
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